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Teen Poetry #3

Missing In My Life

Alex Sankowich
Junior Member

since 2000-07-17

Posts 28
North Carolina, USA

0 posted 2000-07-26 01:12 PM

Britney Spears' "Lucky" inspired me to write this...this song is very good...well I think so because I feel that there's something missing in my life, or either I'm just really depressed.

"Missing In My Life"

Sometimes at night I cry
I really don't know why
I feel as if something's missing in my life
I don't know what it is
I ask myself what it can be
But maybe it's just me
Something's missing in my life
Why do I feel alone?
Sometimes it seems like something is wrong
I know I have a girl
And she's as beautiful as a pearl
But tears fall from my eyes
And there's something missing in my life
Sometimes I feel like I'm the king of the world
Sometimes I feel like I'm gonna die
But nothing in this world can answer the only question I ask
And that question is "Why?"
If there is nothing missing in my life
Then why do these tears fall at night?

--
"True love lasts forever."
"Heroes will get remembered, but legends will never die."

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

1 posted 2000-07-26 04:31 PM

sometimes when i sit here alone and think i cry too...sometimes because im sad, and sometimes for who knows what reason...just because i feel like i have to get the tears out...hang in there buddy...if you ever wanna talk e-mail me...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2000-07-27 06:14 AM

This was nicely penned Alex ... so many questions, but the biggest is always "Why". I've been asking that one for years ... sometimes answers come when you least expect them. Wonderful poem!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-12-16 10:23 AM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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