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Missing In My Life

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Alex Sankowich
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since 07-17-2000
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North Carolina, USA


0 posted 07-26-2000 01:12 PM       View Profile for Alex Sankowich   Email Alex Sankowich   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Alex Sankowich's Home Page   View IP for Alex Sankowich

Britney Spears' "Lucky" inspired me to write this...this song is very good...well I think so because I feel that there's something missing in my life, or either I'm just really depressed.


"Missing In My Life"

Sometimes at night I cry
I really don't know why
I feel as if something's missing in my life
I don't know what it is
I ask myself what it can be
But maybe it's just me
Something's missing in my life
Why do I feel alone?
Sometimes it seems like something is wrong
I know I have a girl
And she's as beautiful as a pearl
But tears fall from my eyes
And there's something missing in my life
Sometimes I feel like I'm the king of the world
Sometimes I feel like I'm gonna die
But nothing in this world can answer the only question I ask
And that question is "Why?"
If there is nothing missing in my life
Then why do these tears fall at night?





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"True love lasts forever."
"Heroes will get remembered, but legends will never die."

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Erin
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since 06-15-2000
Posts 2681
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1 posted 07-26-2000 04:31 PM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

sometimes when i sit here alone and think i cry too...sometimes because im sad, and sometimes for who knows what reason...just because i feel like i have to get the tears out...hang in there buddy...if you ever wanna talk e-mail me...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~
Kit McCallum
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since 04-30-2000
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Ontario, Canada


2 posted 07-27-2000 06:14 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

This was nicely penned Alex ... so many questions, but the biggest is always "Why". I've been asking that one for years ... sometimes answers come when you least expect them.  Wonderful poem!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


3 posted 12-16-2007 10:23 AM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed



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