sleep it is my enemy from it i try to flee for in its grasp i have no free thought in which id think of you but thats for not if im asleep but yet sleep its not so bad if it brings dreams of you then my heart sings with your beauty in my mind though im sad for your touch i cannot find although sleep it is a friend for at its end a new dawn breaks and brings more time time to spend with you sweet memoriesi cherish but alas time soon brings night too sleep please hurry and pass i miss her already alone time is so slow with her its so fast but the memories last staying in my head and in my heart from them i wont part soon tomorrow comes and with it more time time to spend with her
well i agree with you...how sleep takes time away from you grilfriend...cuz it takes time away from me and my boyfriend...but he works so i sleep while he is working...then i stay up all night...keep up the good work...i am becoming a big fan of yours...
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Sleep is essential, I don't think you agree w/ me after reading your poem, but relationships need breathing room, you need space. I run like hell when I don't have it... Besides if I don't sleep I feel like something is missing... I feel crappy.... You write well though, keep it up. Jenn
Dwight Il, US