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Internet Friendship |
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Gregory Junior Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 22Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, United States |
I have this really close internet friend, and I wanted to write her this entitled Internet Pal In a chatroom alone, I never knew That there could be someone quite like you I often sit here and image the beauty of your sight, Could you be a gorgeous angel that dance in the night Maybe a supermodel without a single flaw, Or maybe a perverted pedophile breaking the law No, that's not you you're too kind and sweet, Typing my words, the faster my heart beats I often wonder would we ever see eachother or even meet, But being two distant strangers we could just bump in the street Not knowing eachother we could just walk on by, Realizing deep inside our hearts never lied I can't imagine missing the chance to hold and hug you tight, For I knowing that you were the only one who could Brighten my light Not once did I acknowledge that you could be mean, Because I smiled when those love words appeared on my screen I wouldn't want to regret seeing you and my lips saying "Wow" Because of your beauty my 'Internet Pal' By: Gregory  |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
i have some close friends on the internet...but i have never thought of any like that...whoever this girl is must mean alot to you...and one day i hope that yous two come face to face...i wish you the best of luck... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Gregory! This is a lovely tribute to the friendship you've found ... keep up the great writing! Hope to read more (Check your e-mail for a special message) Best wishes, /Kit |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
Gregory - I had to smile when I read this poem because I too am going through a smiliar situation. The difference being that I did meet the guy last Friday. I know that people say that the internet things never work because it's probly some crazed petefile (sp?) on the other end, but I truly believe that it can work. As a matter of fact, he and I have a date Saturday night. So keep your chin up and I hope you two do meet one day!! Love, Crystal When a door closes, another door of oppurtunity opens. The only problem is that most of us are so busy looking at the closed door that we fail to see |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Welcome to passions Gregory. This is a really nice poem. I never really had any internet friends untill I came into this forum. There are some really great people in here. Hope you like it. Jason  Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear... -Metallica- |
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FairyPrincess Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 25 |
Nice poem.I know exactly how you feel, I've been talking to a guy I met on-line for about a year and I really care about him. I hope things work out for you. Best Wishes, *Jess* |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Welcome to Passions!!! Great poem. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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FairyPrincess Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 25 |
Hey, that was a really great poem. my friend is in a situation with a guy who used to be real nice but now is just a big jerk who tells her what to do and gets mad at her for the stupidist things. There not talking anymore which is good because she always got soooooooo mad that she would almost cry. well i hope the relationship with u works out better then my friends did. Jenn |
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Gregory Junior Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 22Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, United States |
Hope your friend is all right FairyPrincess...some people can be real jerks, and make it bad for others..I hope your friend is all right..Good Luck and keep writing! |
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