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Alex Sankowich
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since 07-17-2000
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North Carolina, USA


0 posted 07-26-2000 12:05 AM       View Profile for Alex Sankowich   Email Alex Sankowich   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Alex Sankowich's Home Page   View IP for Alex Sankowich

I'm depressed right now...but here's what's on my mind I guess...that's what poetry is about.

"dead"

i feel dead
i don't know what to do
i don't know what to say
i want it all to go away
take this away from me
i wish someone could see
what the hell is wrong with me
it makes me want to flee
i want to know what's wrong
and no it's not my shlong
i feel dead
my life has no worth
if i didn't have bristol
i would be lying in my deathbed
my life has no meaning
only to bristol it does
i am only alive for one reason
and that's "just cuz..."
i'd give my life for bristol's
but there is no need
because there is no warning to heed
i've done my good deeds
but who knows from this point
where my life leads
i feel dead
sometimes i just see red
i feel the pain
and i feel like i am gonna go insane
but i've only got myself to blame
so is this the end?
or am i just dead?
i'd better stop while i'm ahead
or like i said
i will be dead
i feel dead


--
"True love lasts forever."
"Heroes will get remembered, but legends will never die."



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Chel
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since 07-01-2000
Posts 516
Baltimore, MD, USA


1 posted 07-26-2000 12:17 PM       View Profile for Chel   Email Chel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chel

Alex, I have never read anything like this from you, but I did enjoy reading it.  Keep your head up.  Keep up the good work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"
Erin
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since 06-15-2000
Posts 2681
~Chicago~


2 posted 07-26-2000 04:23 PM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

you say that your life has no worth in your poem...it sure does...if it didnt you wouldnt be such a good poet...ans people wouldnt love you...but you are a good poet and people do love you...so stop thinking that way...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~
amazon_lover
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since 04-09-2000
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3 posted 07-26-2000 04:25 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amazon_lover

I agree with Erin. Life comes with a mix of emotions. When it gets difficult to handle..rest it and then go on

Sincerely
A_L
Alex Sankowich
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North Carolina, USA


4 posted 07-26-2000 06:02 PM       View Profile for Alex Sankowich   Email Alex Sankowich   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Alex Sankowich's Home Page   View IP for Alex Sankowich

I never said that no one loved me...that poem was just...ehh...it's hard to explain.  I believe in the saying my mom says: "This too shall pass."  I love it.  I know we all have struggles and stuff, and I know I'll get passed it.  But depression, in my own little theory, is a form of schizophrenia.  But sometimes, I just feel bad, sometimes I don't.  I'm out.


--
"True love lasts forever."
"Heroes will get remembered, but legends will never die."



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Artic Wind
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5 posted 12-11-2007 07:33 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed



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