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Fallen Sun

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sherm
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since 07-21-2000
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Evansville,IN


0 posted 07-25-2000 08:26 PM       View Profile for sherm   Email sherm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sherm

i wrote this one after breaking up with my ex while she was trying to convince me there was still a chance


the cornerstone is cracked
the capital has been sacked

theres nothing left
its all gone away
there was a theft
nothing left to say

we're all out of gas
we've spiderwebbed the glass

ive got to stick to my guns
i just cant come back
couldnt take me with the Huns
not going to repack

the boulder was crushed to dust
the walls have fallen to earths crust

the sun has set
thine maker has been met

© Copyright 2000 Geoff A. Anderson - All Rights Reserved
thebeautybrat
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since 03-30-2000
Posts 115
Florida


1 posted 07-25-2000 08:29 PM       View Profile for thebeautybrat   Email thebeautybrat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for thebeautybrat

nice poem!! i completely understand where you are coming from!! nice work!!

It is better to have loved and lost, than to never have loved at all.
Kit McCallum
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since 04-30-2000
Posts 16920
Ontario, Canada


2 posted 07-25-2000 10:41 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Well done!  Boy ... there's no turning back after that one Sherm!  Great imagery!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


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Enjoyed

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