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I Wanna Be With You

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Alex Sankowich
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since 07-17-2000
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North Carolina, USA


0 posted 07-25-2000 07:09 PM       View Profile for Alex Sankowich   Email Alex Sankowich   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Alex Sankowich's Home Page   View IP for Alex Sankowich

Someone may have already wrote a poem like this...and yeah, Mandy Moore sang a song that was called this.  But I've been at the beach, and I've also been longing for my girlfriend, Bristol.  I really didn't have too much of a good time since Bristol wasn't with me.  I just feel so sad.  But um, I'm writing a poem about wanting to be with her.  Here goes.

"I Wanna Be With You"

From the depths of my soul
It's beyond my control
It's been too long
I don't know what to do
All I know is that
I wanna be with you
It's been such a long time
Not seeing eachother is a big crime
You wanna see me too
If I ever asked you to marry me
I hope you say I do
I just wanna be with you
Time is putting us apart
I hope this isn't close to the end
Hopefully not a start
I love you too much
Being with you and such
I really love you
I don't love anyone else
I don't know who
But all I know is that
I wanna be with you
Damn girl I miss you
I have no clue what to do
I can't stand to see other couples
I just wanna be with you
Whether it be tomorrow or tonight
I just want you to be in my arms
And hold you tight
If you only knew
I wanna be with you


--
"True love lasts forever."
"Heroes will get remembered, but legends will never die."



[This message has been edited by Alex Sankowich (edited 07-25-2000).]
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thebeautybrat
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since 03-30-2000
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Florida


1 posted 07-25-2000 08:14 PM       View Profile for thebeautybrat   Email thebeautybrat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for thebeautybrat

i don't know if you meant to do this or not but *from the depths of my soul it's beyond my control* is from the 98 degrees song!! i thought the poem was lovely i just noticed that!! very wonderful poem!! i hope Bristol likes it!!

It is better to have loved and lost, than to never have loved at all.
Alex Sankowich
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since 07-17-2000
Posts 28
North Carolina, USA


2 posted 07-25-2000 08:28 PM       View Profile for Alex Sankowich   Email Alex Sankowich   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Alex Sankowich's Home Page   View IP for Alex Sankowich

Umm...well, it is from 98's "I Do (Cherish You)"....BUT, like I said once, I get my inspiration from music, and if I have one or two lines to go by, I can just hit it off from there with my poem.


--
"True love lasts forever."
"Heroes will get remembered, but legends will never die."



[This message has been edited by Alex Sankowich (edited 07-25-2000).]
Kit McCallum
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since 04-30-2000
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3 posted 07-25-2000 10:37 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Wonderful Alex!  Your longing and yearning comes through loud and clear ... nicely penned!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

P.S. It was a little difficult to read with the small white print Alex ... you might want to experiment a bit to make it easier for the readers  
Erin
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since 06-15-2000
Posts 2681
~Chicago~


4 posted 07-26-2000 03:14 AM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

you are making me go blind...lol seriously you need to change the color...and like kit said make the print bigger...but anyways this is a good poem...i wish you the best of luck with this girl...she must really be special...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~
Chel
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since 07-01-2000
Posts 516
Baltimore, MD, USA


5 posted 07-26-2000 12:35 PM       View Profile for Chel   Email Chel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chel

Alex, once again great poem.  I think you should share this with her.  She sounds like a lucky girl to have someone like you to care about her so much.  Keep up the good work.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


6 posted 12-03-2007 09:38 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
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