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0 posted 07-25-2000 05:39 PM       View Profile for sherm   Email sherm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sherm

id like to apologize first for the double replies iv left a few times    i dont know why that has happened, my computer is really crappy and slow and keeps messing up and i think that has something to do with it   ill try to figure it out     so sorry about that      on with the poem

you really think you know me
but you dont at all
just use me for your amusement
well good, have a ball
laugh at me and think i care
yea right, i thrive on it
as if id be pathetic as you
like my soul gave in and quit
the way yours did one day
just stopped living on its own
throwing away all personality
and giving up the thrown
a voiceless mouth in a crowd
thats all you are
a petty life void of anything meaningful
your existance is just a scar
you think im the sad one
but i have a life, a soul
your just a never was
a loser with a heart of coal

i wrote this about all these people that are the exact same and only care about what their "friends" think of them   i can tell they make fun of me behind my back but i honestly dont care  im proud to be different if that means im myself    
       im a cross between a nerd (good grades), a jock, and a punk (i like alternative, heavy music plus i dress like a punk and have piercings and such

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1 posted 07-25-2000 08:49 PM       View Profile for thebeautybrat   Email thebeautybrat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for thebeautybrat

you sound like a very nice person!! i agree with you that you should just be who you are and not what everyone else wants you to be!! great poem!! it has a really good message!!

It is better to have loved and lost, than to never have loved at all.
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2 posted 07-26-2000 02:36 AM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

well sherm i am a cross between a book worm and a bad girl...i love to read but yet i love to party and get all screwed up...and what people say about me...i can honestly care at least that is...keep up the good work...i am enjoying reading your poems...


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3 posted 07-26-2000 01:42 PM       View Profile for Lani_DarkOne   Email Lani_DarkOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lani_DarkOne

Hey Sherm..
I loved this poem...I share the same view, but sometimes it's better to have a heart of coal than to be hurt..I think people who are 'sheep' as I call people who follow others, are suffering from insecurity, just like the whole crapped up world.
Everyone's existance is a scar...
You sound very interesting, i'm a cross between everything   mostly i'm a meek leetal mouse  

"Controlling my feelings for too long....
And forcing our darkest souls to unfold...
And pushing us into self-destruction...."
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