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mr0001 Junior Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 39 |
why was i born this way? forced to choose between what i know is wrong and what i wish were right. this is not fair to me! it is to hard to know what i could have and yet know what i can't do. so, i try to be like everybody else, normal, for mom, for dad, for you, but it's not that easy. i try to pretend that i'm just like you, that i flirt like you, that i love like you...but i don't. you have no idea what it's like to be me, to never be comfortable in your own skin, because you wish it wasn't yours.  |
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AndrewDL Junior Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 24California |
Great work. Your words seem very sincere. -Andrew Trust too much, and you may be deceived, but trust too little and you will live in torment forever. |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
Mr im glad to see you back havent seen any new work from you in a while!  This is a beautiful poem and i can totaly relate just keep smiling!! and keep writing! < !signature-->The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle [This message has been edited by Jenabou (edited 07-25-2000).] |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
great peice of writing a lot of emotion went into this I can tell!! great work "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I can feel your emotion and sadness in this mr0001 ... my heart goes out to you. I wish I knew your issues more to give you any wisdom I might be able to offer. We are all so different than each other ... each person is unique, and special ... and for the talent you hold in expressing yourself through your words, you are wonderful and special indeed! Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
mr0001~~~i have no idea what its like to be you but you will never know what its like to be me...we will never know what its like to be each other...keep up the good work...this is a wonderful poem... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
really good poem what your saying is all too true for all too many im kinda a bumper sticker junkie and my car is covered but theres this one that is a favorite of mine "Its better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you are not" |
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mr0001 Junior Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 39 |
thanx everybody for responding!! i know that this poem was just a bit vague, but i'm still working up the courage to actually say what i'm talking about....anyway....i've been suffering from extreme writer's block for about a month, so that's why you haven't seen much from me, but hopefully it is clearing up  thanx again for the encouragement...byemr "crazy" is just who you are...amplified. some people draw the outlines in life, i chose to add the color. |
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FairyPrincess Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 25 |
That was a wonderful poem, full of emotion. keep up the good work. *jess* |
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