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Happiness

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Heather Renee
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since 07-25-2000
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Bowling Green, Kentucky


0 posted 07-25-2000 04:30 AM       View Profile for Heather Renee   Email Heather Renee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Heather Renee

Happiness

I stand still as I watch happiness run past me
I chase after it hoping to get a little of it
But it's too fast

I ask myself in vain, "When will it be me?"
But I know the answer
Because she's always there, standing in the way

It's not her fault
But what else can I do?
I just want to be with you

I stand still as you run past me
I turn to run after you, but I can't move
Because there she is, standing in between me and you  



~Everyone can master grief, but she that has it.
© Copyright 2000 Heather - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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since 04-30-2000
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Ontario, Canada


1 posted 07-25-2000 06:43 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

This is very nicely written Heather ... a very unique way to look at a love triangle ... very nicely penned! Hope things work out for you ...  

Best wishes,
/Kit
sherm
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since 07-21-2000
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Evansville,IN


2 posted 07-25-2000 07:53 PM       View Profile for sherm   Email sherm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sherm

im a little afraid to leave a reply cause my computer keeps messing up and leaving my replies twice but i thought this was a great poem and wanted to tell you that    i hope your future will hold that happiness you seek
Erin
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since 06-15-2000
Posts 2681
~Chicago~


3 posted 07-26-2000 04:44 PM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

i hope that in the future you find someone that will give you pure happiness...without some other girl standing in your way...good luck...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


4 posted 12-03-2007 09:41 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

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