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sherm
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since 2000-07-21
Posts 94
Evansville,IN

0 posted 2000-07-25 02:20 AM


no one knows me
or how much it hurts
how bad my pain can be
they just dont see

i have this invisible pain
in my life like a stain
throws me into a depressive state
fills me with grief and hate

the past is a broken bone
and makes me feel all alone
the fun times are no more
gone before i came ashore

no one knows me
or how much it hurts
how bad my pain can be
they just dont see

all the fun times i never had
the lonely memories that make me sad
the invisible past of a no one
filled with the pain of someone

no pictures of friends and me
no fun memories to flip through and see
just a wasted seventeen years
darkness to the eyes and silence to the ears

no one knows me
or how much it hurts
how bad my pain can be
they just dont see


this is about me moving around a lot and never living in one place for more than a few years    so then when i finally make friends i hear about all their fun times and see their pictures, things i dont really have, and everything that used to be fun that i want to experience is something they have done a million times and are bored of



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Heather Renee
New Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 4
Bowling Green, Kentucky
1 posted 2000-07-25 04:34 AM


~hey...I just want to congratulate you on this wonderful poem. It has so much pain and meaning in it. I can tell it came straight from the heart. congrats...keep writing!! You have a great talent! =0)~ *god bless*

~Everyone can master grief, but she that has it.

Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-07-25 06:52 AM


You've expressed your emotions so well in this lovely verse Sherm!  I'm so sorry for the pain you feel in this. I had never thought of how difficult this must be on young people to move around so often, but I can now see this in your words. Beautiful writing Sherm.

If there's one consolation I can offer, it is that as long as you have a computer when you move ... you'll find that you'll never lose the group of friends you build here at Passions ... they'll travel right along with you.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 07-25-2000).]

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-12-03 08:27 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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