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Rockhead01
Junior Member
since 2000-06-26
Posts 12
Maryland, USA

0 posted 2000-07-24 10:36 PM


We are best of friends
Friends 'til the end
But i'm starting to feel
More toward you than a friend
you tell me the problems
Of your relationship with him
And how you're so miserable
And your tolerance is filled to the rim
If you're so miserable with him
Then why do you stay in his arms
Come to me and be more happy in life
For I will never treat you with harm
I've grown to like you
More and more passing day
But if you do not feel the same
I won't stand in your way
If you feel like running away
That's usually not best
But if you do leave your home
On which my shoulder you can rest
I care for you greatly
And hope everything works out
but whatever problems you have
I'll listen to whatever it's about


Make Love
Not War

© Copyright 2000 Dan Youngs - All Rights Reserved
StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
1 posted 2000-07-24 10:47 PM


How sweet is that?!!? I truly hope that everything works out for the two of you!! Just be careful not to sacrifice your friendship through it all! Best of luck my friend! And the poem was great! Maybe you should give it to her...
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A
LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn;
SkInNeD kNeEs AnD
bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE
eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a
BrOkEn HeArT!*~*


Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-07-25 06:10 AM


This was so lovely Rockhead!  I hope all works out for you both, and you are able to share these beautiful thoughts with her when the time is right.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
3 posted 2000-07-25 08:45 AM


That was very sweet.  I hope that everything works out.  It just seems harder when its your friend.  Just keep your head up.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
4 posted 2000-07-26 02:23 PM


well rockhead i wish you the best with this girl...i hope that one day she will realize what kind of person you are...and maybe take your friendship a little bit past a friendship...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-12-03 09:39 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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