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A Friend Thing

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since 06-26-2000
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Maryland, USA

0 posted 07-24-2000 10:36 PM       View Profile for Rockhead01   Email Rockhead01   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rockhead01

We are best of friends
Friends 'til the end
But i'm starting to feel
More toward you than a friend
you tell me the problems
Of your relationship with him
And how you're so miserable
And your tolerance is filled to the rim
If you're so miserable with him
Then why do you stay in his arms
Come to me and be more happy in life
For I will never treat you with harm
I've grown to like you
More and more passing day
But if you do not feel the same
I won't stand in your way
If you feel like running away
That's usually not best
But if you do leave your home
On which my shoulder you can rest
I care for you greatly
And hope everything works out
but whatever problems you have
I'll listen to whatever it's about

Make Love
Not War
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1 posted 07-24-2000 10:47 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

How sweet is that?!!? I truly hope that everything works out for the two of you!! Just be careful not to sacrifice your friendship through it all! Best of luck my friend! And the poem was great! Maybe you should give it to her...
Love Always

*~* I wIsH I wAs A
LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn;
SkInNeD kNeEs AnD
bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE
eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a
BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

Kit McCallum
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2 posted 07-25-2000 06:10 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

This was so lovely Rockhead!  I hope all works out for you both, and you are able to share these beautiful thoughts with her when the time is right.

Best wishes,
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since 07-01-2000
Posts 516
Baltimore, MD, USA

3 posted 07-25-2000 08:45 AM       View Profile for Chel   Email Chel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chel

That was very sweet.  I hope that everything works out.  It just seems harder when its your friend.  Just keep your head up.


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"
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since 06-15-2000
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4 posted 07-26-2000 02:23 PM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

well rockhead i wish you the best with this girl...i hope that one day she will realize what kind of person you are...and maybe take your friendship a little bit past a friendship...keep up the good work...

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