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Sweet Lullabye

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Ceinwyn
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since 07-09-2000
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0 posted 07-24-2000 09:32 PM       View Profile for Ceinwyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ceinwyn

This is to my dear sweet; Jeremy..twisted as it may seem, you are my beautiful dragon that helps brighten my soul in the darkest of night...

My pet dragon
Looms and Lurks among
the mists of my imagination
He's purely manifested
from the depths of my soul

When I'm all alone in the dark
He sits at my bedside
Holding my hand, wiping away
my tears and crushing my fears
Whenever I wake from a startling
dream
My dragon, wraps me with
his soft dragon wings
And begins to softly whisper
a sweet lullabye within my ears
He softly kisses my cheek
as he watches me fall back asleep
Once I begin to snore
and finds everything safe
He disappears back
to his hiding place
Asleep for an eternity
Until my darkest hour of need
and my heart begins to bleed
Then back at my bedside
he resides
Wiping away my tears
and crushing my fears
And soothing my soul
with a sweet lullabye


"Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night"

~Crash and Burn~


[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (edited 07-24-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
Isabel Galaxia
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since 06-18-2000
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1 posted 07-24-2000 09:42 PM       View Profile for Isabel Galaxia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Isabel Galaxia

That was really good!  Very descriptive.  I can't say much else except that that was very good and I'm impressed-keep it up!
Bel
StarPryncess17
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since 05-31-2000
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2 posted 07-24-2000 10:52 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

A wonderful tribute at that to a dear friend! As astranged as Jeremy can seem, he has such a warm heart...Funny, I'm sooo many mile from the guy but he can make me smile when I'm crying and make me laugh when I'm upset. You are a very lucky girl Kristen! I hope everything works out with you two!! Nice writing...keep it up!  
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A
LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn;
SkInNeD kNeEs AnD
bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE
eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a
BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

Jeremy Halstead
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3 posted 07-25-2000 03:16 AM       View Profile for Jeremy Halstead   Email Jeremy Halstead   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jeremy Halstead

Girl....you are too sweet!!!  If I could cry right now,  I swear to god I would.  I eternaly thank you from the depths of my bottomless soul for this.  You're so wonderful.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."
Kit McCallum
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4 posted 07-25-2000 06:40 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

This was such a beautiful and melodic verse Ceinwyn!  Reads like a lovely lullibye itself.  Well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Jacman
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since 06-27-2000
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5 posted 07-25-2000 09:29 PM       View Profile for Jacman   Email Jacman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jacman

I loved the comparison and the simile of the dragon.  This was a most beautifull piece.  Good enough to make me shed a tear.

Jason

Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear...
-Metallica-
thebeautybrat
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6 posted 07-25-2000 11:46 PM       View Profile for thebeautybrat   Email thebeautybrat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for thebeautybrat

i loved this poem!! it was so creative!! don't forget to stop by my poems and comment on them!!

It is better to have loved and lost, than to never have loved at all.
Artic Wind
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7 posted 12-03-2007 08:28 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
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