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Last laugh, Last chance

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Kittie
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since 07-08-2000
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0 posted 07-24-2000 09:31 PM       View Profile for Kittie   Email Kittie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kittie

~After several accidents, many things go through my head when I'm in a car, this is one of them where it's part fact, part fiction.~

Our eyes glisten with tears
as we laugh at another horrible joke;
trying to calm down
because it's the middle of the night.
Everytime we sit together
laughing is all that's heard;
I am the brother he doesn't have,
though I'm no more than a young lady
who climbed trees with him.
We use our little voices,
tiny but too funny to ignore,
and tell more jokes than everyone can bear
for they continue to yell for silence.
Even this night,
as we drive home from our trip,
and our laughter is roaring through our pillows
that we hold over our mouths to qiuet ourselves down
But as we continue to make animal shadows
on our parents head,
we pretend to communicate
with our attempts for last laugh.
In his eyes
my laughter grows,
and deep down I know
I would be nowhere without my twin brother.
Lights around blur,
the rain becomes blinding
though it is not enough
to calm the roaring flames
that devour my parents instantly.
I can't deny the pain
even as my body goes numb;
when I wake again,
there is only one surviver from our van.
I wish now
that the truck behind had read CAUTION
instead of trying to ignore
the red lights ahead.
Moreso, I wish I hadn'te wasted
my last chance
to tell the people riding in our van,
"I love you" and "good bye"


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StarPryncess17
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since 05-31-2000
Posts 944
Colorado


1 posted 07-24-2000 11:24 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

VERY GOOD KITTIE!!
So sorry about the true part of this story! I hope you'll use much more caution when in the car! Keep writing, it helps.
And if you ever wanna talk just e-mail me at StarPryncess17@hotmail.com
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A
LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn;
SkInNeD kNeEs AnD
bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE
eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a
BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

Kit McCallum
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since 04-30-2000
Posts 16920
Ontario, Canada


2 posted 07-25-2000 06:14 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Oh Kittie! Such incredible thoughts and emotions you've penned.  Without know which part is truth or fiction ... I am aching for you my dear.  You brought back some wonderful memories for me of long trips with a brother and sister of my own ... please take care.

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit
Chel
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since 07-01-2000
Posts 516
Baltimore, MD, USA


3 posted 07-25-2000 08:31 AM       View Profile for Chel   Email Chel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chel

I definitly think this needs to be in the book.  I loved it, it had a lot of emotion.  Keep up the good work.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"
Lovely_Kris
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since 07-11-2000
Posts 178


4 posted 07-25-2000 10:17 PM       View Profile for Lovely_Kris   Email Lovely_Kris   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lovely_Kris

VERY GOOD! I Really like your poem! I hope to read more of your poems and keep up the great work.
Lovely_Kris
Erin
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since 06-15-2000
Posts 2681
~Chicago~


5 posted 07-26-2000 03:24 AM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

kittie im really sorry to hear about this...i can relate to you on the car accidents part...i have been in so many its like the hospital is a second home to me...keep up the good work...and becareful...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~
Jacman
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since 06-27-2000
Posts 290
Dwight Il, US


6 posted 07-26-2000 10:49 AM       View Profile for Jacman   Email Jacman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jacman

When I was little, my best friend was Jessica Smith.  We used to play in her parents station wagon and pretend that the headlights of coming cars were evil spaceships and had to be destroyed.  The first part of the poem brought on this happy memory instantly.

The second part however did not bring about any happy memories.  I hope that this was not true but if it is my heart goes out to you and I wish nothing but the best.  Just remember those good times because they can stick with you just as long as the sad times.

Jason

Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear...
-Metallica-
TearsOfPearls
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since 09-23-1999
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Vereeniging, South-Africa


7 posted 07-26-2000 01:32 PM       View Profile for TearsOfPearls   Email TearsOfPearls   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TearsOfPearls

Kittie, this is a lovely poem! Your poems have always been sad and full of emotion, I'm thinking about the kitten in the park one at the moment, and now I know why.

I am sorry to hear about your loss, I can't imagine the pain you must feel, but just know that God is holding you in His hands.

Best wishes

Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach.
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


8 posted 12-03-2007 09:38 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
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