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Love with a vision

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amazon_lover
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0 posted 07-24-2000 04:07 PM       View Profile for amazon_lover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amazon_lover

I had a wonderful dream yesterday
Resting on your lap and looking at stars
You teaching me all those fanciful galaxies
It was silent night away from everyone
Just you and me together as one
I remember saying we'll be together forever
In other's eyes all we do is improper
But without your love I'm a pauper
Then we hug and kiss each other
Everything is so simple and real
I'll give my life for this moment
When I can hold you tenderly in my arms
Make love to you in every possible way
Then we stand naked under moonlight
Thinking whether its right time or not
Passion raging in me and you
An uncontrollable need to satisy the lust growing
Then we put on our clothes
We sleep toghether with a vision
A vision of togetherness forever
Realising love is not just lust
Its commitment to be together forever
The dream ends then I'm awake with a new life

Sincerely
A_L
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Chel
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1 posted 07-25-2000 08:40 AM       View Profile for Chel   Email Chel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chel

Beautiful poem.  Keep up the good work.

Chel

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Martini
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2 posted 07-25-2000 03:04 PM       View Profile for Martini   Email Martini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Martini

wow
this was really good!!!  
great work

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Erin
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3 posted 07-26-2000 02:11 AM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

A_L~~~ what can i possible say...this is a really good poem...this one is my all time favorite by you...i give you props for this poem...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~
Sudhir Iyer
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since 04-26-2000
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4 posted 07-27-2000 09:28 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

A revitalising dream, I concur...

Amazon_Lover...
nice fluent poetry... enjoyed this one..

regards,
sudhir

Artic Wind
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5 posted 12-16-2007 10:23 AM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed



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