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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Open all of the windows, But close all of the doors. Try to escape forever, Try to leave the present. You can not change the past, Yet you plead for a way. Beg for your life back, Ask for a brighter day. Worry plagues your heart, Nervousness overwhelms. Some people find it hard to forgive... But I find it difficult to stay hurt. Impossible dreams, Drowning in sorrow... Give me a chance... Let me see the way. |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Very good writing! Very deep and intriguing. Masterful performance! *~Meredith~* It's so obvious That the promise Keeps me here Painting pictures where All the colors Disappear *Lit |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Some people find it hard to forgive... But I find it difficult to stay hurt." Wonderful poem Jenn ... thought provoking! I really liked the lines above ... well done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
really good poem i know theres many times i wish i could have changed the past but i think its good we cant we need mistakes and pains to remember and help live the present |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
"you cant change the past." so many people wish to change there past...i know i would like to...but we cant...they are all learning experiences... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
God, I wish we could change the past, not our experiences, but perhaps, the way we handled them?? Jenn |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
jenn~~~i just wish i could turn back the time when i decided to screw around in school...cuz it took alot of money and hard work just for me to graduate on stage...and i agree with you just change the experiences too... ~*~TrUe LoVe Is ThE cLoSeSt ThInG tO hEaVen~*~ |
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