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No One But the Rain

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The_Driven
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since 07-11-2000
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0 posted 07-24-2000 02:43 AM       View Profile for The_Driven   Email The_Driven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The_Driven


"I'am alone.
I'am depressed.
I'am in alot of pain."

No one to share in my misery.
No one i can talk to about my pain.
No one to keep me company.
No one but the rain.

Suddenly, im sinking...
A Languid feeling overtakes me.
When my eyes finally open next,
I find that i'am free.

Free from the same depressing shadows,
and the misery that binds me to these things.
Floating, gliding through paradise,
on crystal-colored wings.

Ah! here is the life!
Free of pain, free of misery.
Free of this plague called stryfe.

However, the more im here,
the more i see...
This fantastic life is not meant to be.

As much as i try to deny it,
as much as it feels good to be free.
The reality of it is:
A cold, and unforgiving life,
is the only thing awaiting me.

I try not to wake up,
i hold onto my dreams tight.
For if i were to let go,
then  i would surely lose the fight.

I cling to my dream,
desperately scraped together to help a dying spirit.
But as much as i try to fight,
i can sense the end of my dream nearing.

What was once warm like the sun's glow,
is now unforgiving; depressingly cold.
The cruel hand of reality,  
has struck me three-fold.

Bringing me back to my life of misery.
Back to my life of pain.
With no one to keep me company.
No one but the rain.

"DAMMIT, WHY COULDN'T YOU JUST LET ME DREAM!!!!"




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Vball Chickie1624
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since 05-14-2000
Posts 119
New York


1 posted 07-24-2000 07:57 AM       View Profile for Vball Chickie1624   Email Vball Chickie1624   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Vball Chickie1624's Home Page   View IP for Vball Chickie1624

That was a very interesting poem.  I liked it a lot....very good.  I hope to read more.  Keep writing and have fun!!

Love ya
Danielle  

"Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you
Chel
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since 07-01-2000
Posts 516
Baltimore, MD, USA


2 posted 07-24-2000 09:37 AM       View Profile for Chel   Email Chel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chel

Hey there, nice poem, very intersting.  Leaves me with a lot of questions.  Keep up the good work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"
Lani_DarkOne
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since 05-28-2000
Posts 152
UK


3 posted 07-24-2000 01:47 PM       View Profile for Lani_DarkOne   Email Lani_DarkOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lani_DarkOne

I know exactly how you feel..waking from dreams hurts alot, i'd rather not dream..
this is excellent, your feelings are portrayed vividly and to the point..

"Controlling my feelings for too long....
And forcing our darkest souls to unfold...
And pushing us into self-destruction...."
*~Muse*~
LyricFetish
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since 01-13-2000
Posts 515
North Carolina


4 posted 07-24-2000 04:03 PM       View Profile for LyricFetish   Email LyricFetish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LyricFetish

Wow, your poem is full of passion and yearning. Very true, and very scary. Great job!

*~Meredith~*

It's so obvious
That the promise
Keeps me here
Painting pictures where
All the colors
Disappear
*Lit
Le Capitan de L'Amour
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since 07-15-2000
Posts 59


5 posted 07-25-2000 05:58 PM       View Profile for Le Capitan de L'Amour   Email Le Capitan de L'Amour   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Le Capitan de L'Amour

Hey Berry thats a very nice poem, and  i want u to know that I share that pain with you.see ya later buddy.from chris
Erin
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since 06-15-2000
Posts 2681
~Chicago~


6 posted 07-26-2000 05:34 PM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

this poem is quite intresting...alot of people feel the same way you do...they just dont express what they are feeling...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~
The_Driven
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since 07-11-2000
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7 posted 07-26-2000 08:49 PM       View Profile for The_Driven   Email The_Driven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The_Driven

Although i dont actually feel this way in real life(well sometimes), i would still  like to thank you all for your responses. They were a pleasure to read.
Artic Wind
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8 posted 12-11-2007 07:34 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed



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