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O Restless Waves

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Euclid the Kid
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0 posted 07-23-2000 11:58 PM       View Profile for Euclid the Kid   Email Euclid the Kid   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Euclid the Kid

O restless waves,you toss about
as I stand upon the shore
waving like a nervous friend
whom of my friendship's unsure.
You bring me ocean treasures
of broken bits of shell
and smoothed out drift wood pieces
and think you're doing well.

But who are you trying to please
and why would I want these things?
Can't I want you for yourself-
not what your friendship brings?
o restless waves, be calmed
You have a true friend in me
and together with us, united
we can sail life's stormy seas.
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sherm
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since 07-21-2000
Posts 94
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1 posted 07-24-2000 01:50 AM       View Profile for sherm   Email sherm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sherm

i really like your poem    some people think love needs "things", but all it really needs is the happiness it brings
Kit McCallum
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2 posted 07-24-2000 06:48 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Beautiful sentiments Euclid ... true friendship is a treasure!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
Lani_DarkOne
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3 posted 07-24-2000 01:51 PM       View Profile for Lani_DarkOne   Email Lani_DarkOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lani_DarkOne

Very very nice imagery...i love it, and the hidden depth in it, absolutely great  

"Controlling my feelings for too long....
And forcing our darkest souls to unfold...
And pushing us into self-destruction...."
*~Muse*~
StarPryncess17
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4 posted 07-24-2000 11:05 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

I really can't stand it!! Just Kidding! I loved the poem! I love all of your work, I admire the way you incorporate your analogies into the piece and make it work. Absolutely Beautiful!! It is truly great to have such a friendship. True friendship is the only treasure need come from a relationship. This person is very lucky to have such a friend! Keep it up Euclid!
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A
LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn;
SkInNeD kNeEs AnD
bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE
eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a
BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

Artic Wind
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5 posted 12-03-2007 08:27 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
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