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Beastie

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Lani_DarkOne
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since 05-28-2000
Posts 152
UK


0 posted 07-23-2000 09:15 AM       View Profile for Lani_DarkOne   Email Lani_DarkOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lani_DarkOne

I've perpetually inhabited the cold,
Beast's lair.
Flung around viciously,
Under eternal enmity
Of innocence long lost.
Caustic ice flourishes
Because warmth, sanity
Has been killed.

Beast is beyond any realms
Of trembling children's nightmares.
Seductively it wails
Pledges protection
From the world of heartache.
It's cunning dark allure
Drew me into it's shivering cave
When I was five.

Beast,
Drained me of life
Chasing, pouncing upon
Breathing air of icicles
Stabbed my cries
Sucked my laughter

I froze,
A cynical
Ice beast-cub.


"Controlling my feelings for too long....
And forcing our darkest souls to unfold...
And pushing us into self-destruction...."
*~Muse*~
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sherm
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since 07-21-2000
Posts 94
Evansville,IN


1 posted 07-23-2000 12:47 PM       View Profile for sherm   Email sherm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sherm

cool poem   its really hard not to get sucked into the beasts lair sometimes just dont let it drain your life      keep on going and having fun
StarPryncess17
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since 05-31-2000
Posts 944
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2 posted 07-23-2000 03:21 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

Those who fight monsters shouel be careful not to become one.
Nice work Lani! I think your work is excellent and I admire your thoughts of eloquence and darkness. I hope to read more soon.
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A
LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn;
SkInNeD kNeEs AnD
bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE
eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a
BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

Alwye
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since 06-16-99
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In the space between moments


3 posted 07-23-2000 11:01 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

A dark journey with the beast that many of us have met before...very elegant and deep poetry here.  I enjoyed it greatly.  

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


4 posted 12-02-2007 08:32 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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