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Teen Poetry #3

Freedom

sherm
Member

since 2000-07-21

Posts 94
Evansville,IN

0 posted 2000-07-23 02:58 AM

dont be afraid to stand out in a crowd
just be yourself and let it out loud
have a personality of your own
dont care if others grown
just smile and know in your heart
that you are special in every way and part
let loose and have fun in your life
otherwise youll be crushed by strife
and by the strong desire of your inner self
relentlessly trying to get out and off the shelf
to say here i am world, judge me
but no matter what they think finally feel free

HerMelness
Junior Member

since 2000-07-12

Posts 37
Bridgewater, NS, Canada

1 posted 2000-07-23 11:45 AM

This is a really cool poem, and it's entirely true!! This is something that should be posted where people everywhere will see it. Everyone should have this kind of confidence.. nicely done!
-Mel-

-Wherever you go, go with all your heart.-

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

2 posted 2000-07-23 03:38 PM

Sherm, this poem was nicely worded, and all too often I wish that I could have this confidence. I think we all need to see this and seriously think about it. Because if you're not free, you're not going to be happy...so just think about all the unhappy people in the world. Keep it up! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

*~* I wIsH I wAs A
LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn;
SkInNeD kNeEs AnD
bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE
eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a
BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-12-02 08:32 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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