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If I could show you my world

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Fairy Princess
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since 07-19-2000
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Fitchburg Ma, USA


0 posted 07-23-2000 01:20 AM       View Profile for Fairy Princess   Email Fairy Princess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Fairy Princess's Home Page   View IP for Fairy Princess

If I could show you my world I would
It's filled with love, anger, happiness

I'd show you what love means to me,
I'd show you what anger means to me,
I'd show you what happiness means to me

One day I'll become a wonderful poet,
And show the world my life

I'll also show everyone that life's not fair,
I want to show people my world

But so little time and the days fly by us,
I will show the whole world my world

No one's stopping me
Only I can stop this one

But I'm not going to stop this
It wouldn't be who I was meant to be

So one day people will be wondering who is she
I'll know that I'm not famous or anything just me

On this mission it's me fighting this disability,
On this mission I'm going to make my dreams come true

I maybe disabled but my heart controlls my mind
So it's all up to me to show the world my own world

© Copyright 2000 Minna - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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since 04-30-2000
Posts 16920
Ontario, Canada


1 posted 07-23-2000 07:23 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Very inspirational Fairy Princess!  What a positive, uplifting read for my first poem of the morning! Well done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
StarPryncess17
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since 05-31-2000
Posts 944
Colorado


2 posted 07-23-2000 03:41 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

~*~Minna~*~
Very inspiring! I think you have such a great personality and attitude. I'm so glad that you don't feel sorry for your self about your disability! Great quality to have!! Keep it up!

Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A
LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn;
SkInNeD kNeEs AnD
bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE
eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a
BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

Alwye
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since 06-16-99
Posts 3968
In the space between moments


3 posted 07-23-2000 10:43 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Very uplifting and powerful!  You have a great additude!  

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


4 posted 12-02-2007 08:32 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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