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Fairy Princess
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 64
Fitchburg Ma, USA

0 posted 2000-07-23 01:20 AM


If I could show you my world I would
It's filled with love, anger, happiness

I'd show you what love means to me,
I'd show you what anger means to me,
I'd show you what happiness means to me

One day I'll become a wonderful poet,
And show the world my life

I'll also show everyone that life's not fair,
I want to show people my world

But so little time and the days fly by us,
I will show the whole world my world

No one's stopping me
Only I can stop this one

But I'm not going to stop this
It wouldn't be who I was meant to be

So one day people will be wondering who is she
I'll know that I'm not famous or anything just me

On this mission it's me fighting this disability,
On this mission I'm going to make my dreams come true

I maybe disabled but my heart controlls my mind
So it's all up to me to show the world my own world


© Copyright 2000 Minna - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-07-23 07:23 AM


Very inspirational Fairy Princess!  What a positive, uplifting read for my first poem of the morning! Well done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
2 posted 2000-07-23 03:41 PM


~*~Minna~*~
Very inspiring! I think you have such a great personality and attitude. I'm so glad that you don't feel sorry for your self about your disability! Great quality to have!! Keep it up!

Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A
LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn;
SkInNeD kNeEs AnD
bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE
eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a
BrOkEn HeArT!*~*


Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
3 posted 2000-07-23 10:43 PM


Very uplifting and powerful!  You have a great additude!  

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-12-02 08:32 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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