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the ghost

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Jose Marti
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since 07-01-2000
Posts 376
washing DC


0 posted 07-22-2000 10:39 PM       View Profile for Jose Marti   Email Jose Marti   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Jose Marti

On the day I was set free,

I went searching for you.

You who had called my name

You who had expressed your desire,

called to me.


I wanted to

rush into rush into your arms,

to feel your warmth,

and I could not.


I found myself entangled,

and chained down,

hopelessly I watched you cry,

as you realized that you

couldn't hold me in your embrace


We reached for eachother

but my chains held fast

to my mortal limbs.


I was finally set free,

so I went in search of you…

and you to my amazment…

Gone.


Absoulutly,

without a trace

as if you had been a ghost,

that desolved into tears,

and was never seen again.
© Copyright 2000 Jose Marti - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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since 06-16-99
Posts 3968
In the space between moments


1 posted 07-23-2000 10:50 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Such sorrow...but written extremely well.  Keep up the great work!  

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis
Chel
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since 07-01-2000
Posts 516
Baltimore, MD, USA


2 posted 07-24-2000 09:45 AM       View Profile for Chel   Email Chel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chel

Very emotional poem.  I am sure that I am the last person you want to hear from.  Just keep your head up.  I liked the poem, though, keep up the good work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"
Lani_DarkOne
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since 05-28-2000
Posts 152
UK


3 posted 07-24-2000 01:55 PM       View Profile for Lani_DarkOne   Email Lani_DarkOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lani_DarkOne

Excellent, full of grief...and pain..

"Controlling my feelings for too long....
And forcing our darkest souls to unfold...
And pushing us into self-destruction...."
*~Muse*~
Artic Wind
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since 09-16-2007
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Realm of Supernatural


4 posted 12-03-2007 08:26 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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