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CLBinLOVE
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since 06-04-2000
Posts 147
Hilton Head, SC, USA


0 posted 07-22-2000 09:37 PM       View Profile for CLBinLOVE   Email CLBinLOVE   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CLBinLOVE

It is darkness
In the most literal way
It can change a person
In just one day

It can happen
In just one instant
Or it can become
Over many a days, doubled and bent

It can leave
With the touch of a hand
Can be warded off
By the powers of a man

It changes the world
For those who know it
It is a world changing event
For those who get it

It can make people stronger
In an abstract way
It is painful and cruel
But people survive day to day

For those who it attacks
In the middle of their life
It is horrifying thing to face
And to overcome it means strife

For me it is
Only a momentary thing
It will go away soon
It will be just a “fling”

But for some it is more
For some it is their life
And from my little experience
I can identify their strife

What is it?



always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside for a while... :)
© Copyright 2000 Craig Baker - All Rights Reserved
CLBinLOVE
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Posts 147
Hilton Head, SC, USA


1 posted 07-22-2000 09:48 PM       View Profile for CLBinLOVE   Email CLBinLOVE   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CLBinLOVE

well, as before, jus email me for the awnser, and since the story behind it is kinda what ive been doin thats kept me from writing it, AND the story will give it away, than email me for the story too
SORRY FOR THE INCONVIENCE but i really dont wanna spoil this one, i wanna see waht everyone will awnser to this cuz i think its a hard one
and again thanks everyone
CLB
cutie2005
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since 04-30-2000
Posts 150
Bennett, Colorado USA


2 posted 07-22-2000 09:48 PM       View Profile for cutie2005   Email cutie2005   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cutie2005

This one is a really hard one i can't not figure it out... sorry i don't have a good guess, but is it like hate or something...??!!
Erin
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since 06-15-2000
Posts 2681
~Chicago~


3 posted 07-23-2000 02:59 PM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

at the top of my mind i have one guess to what it is...but this riddle is kinda hard...my guess is a brokenheart...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~
StarPryncess17
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since 05-31-2000
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4 posted 07-23-2000 03:14 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

well, my guess is as good as anybody's right about now. If I have to have an answer I would say the same thing as erin...a broken heart...? I'll be e-mailing you soon...ok NOW! hehe. nicely done though! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

*~* I wIsH I wAs A
LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn;
SkInNeD kNeEs AnD
bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE
eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a
BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

Chel
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since 07-01-2000
Posts 516
Baltimore, MD, USA


5 posted 07-24-2000 09:49 AM       View Profile for Chel   Email Chel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chel

Hey there, I am not too sure about my answer, but I think that I shouldn't say anything yet.  Maybe I will leave with a guess or two...brokenheart like erin and jess said.  I doubt I am right, but one never knows.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"
Vball Chickie1624
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since 05-14-2000
Posts 119
New York


6 posted 07-24-2000 10:58 AM       View Profile for Vball Chickie1624   Email Vball Chickie1624   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Vball Chickie1624's Home Page   View IP for Vball Chickie1624

That was a very good poem.  Well written.  I'll look forward to reading more of your work.  Keep writing and have fun.

Love ya
Danielle  

"Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you
TrueLUV
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7 posted 07-25-2000 12:57 AM       View Profile for TrueLUV   Email TrueLUV   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TrueLUV

Poem was a true work of deep emotion I hope all comes out well in the end   hope to read more of you work
Rachel8383
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since 04-13-2000
Posts 47


8 posted 07-26-2000 01:48 PM       View Profile for Rachel8383   Email Rachel8383   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rachel8383

Great job, i'd have to guess with the others, a brokenheart.  keep it up, it was great!  *Rach*
Artic Wind
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9 posted 12-03-2007 09:39 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
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