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Waiting for eternity

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Le Capitan de L'Amour
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since 07-15-2000
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0 posted 07-22-2000 07:38 PM       View Profile for Le Capitan de L'Amour   Email Le Capitan de L'Amour   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Le Capitan de L'Amour

Yesterday was the night, the night I dream about you, the night I had you beside me, the night I went to war, the night I got captured and executed.

But even in the darkness of death, I remembered you,
even hen the gods of that heavenly sky tryed to erase my memory of you I didnt let it go.

And after i waited an eternity, you finnaly came, but it was too late because I was about to be reeborn again.

But before I left I got a kiss from those virgin lips, which I remembered since that night when I left you.

Then I finnaly woked up in the middle of the night and I realize it was just a dream, and ever since I thanked god  every day for having you and for been with you, been with the most beautifull woman in the
world as beautifull as Cleopatra, and with these words I said "Good night my darling good night".
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StarPryncess17
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since 05-31-2000
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1 posted 07-22-2000 07:41 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

Such sentiments involved! Your thoughts are anything but incomplete and leaves for interesting reading! Well, a dream is a dream, but I do know how you feel. Keep writing, you're good at it!
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A
LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn;
SkInNeD kNeEs AnD
bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE
eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a
BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

buttercup411
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since 07-03-2000
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miami, fl, u.s


2 posted 07-22-2000 07:45 PM       View Profile for buttercup411   Email buttercup411   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for buttercup411

hey .......girls love a guy who could express like that...good job ... : )
au revoir,
love
une jeune fille... : )
Jose Marti
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since 07-01-2000
Posts 376
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3 posted 07-22-2000 10:08 PM       View Profile for Jose Marti   Email Jose Marti   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jose Marti

Great poem christian. It has very good ending, I envy your writing skills tremendously. Bon chance ici.
Artic Wind
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4 posted 12-02-2007 08:31 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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