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Le Capitan de L'Amour
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since 2000-07-15
Posts 60


0 posted 2000-07-22 06:41 PM


Authors note-this is a true incident of my life.

The day I met you was the most lovable day of our relationship until that night,

that night in which you came to my arms swiftly,

and with happiness I lit the candles for you and I in that passionate moment to become lovers,

lovers of the art, lovers of the sweet nectar of our love,

since we just started with a dance and finished with
one another,

but with that same night you left like the wind without leaving evidence of been there,

only in my conciousness you sweet Michelle that left me with sorrow and discord for the actions that made me less of a man,

and that left me like a worm on the floor helpless with no life,

just the past of you with your sword of haste that broke through my heart,

just leaving a letter saying no to my faithfull
love,

which made me feel like the most hideous creature on earth,

but the only light i have now is just that night of "love & passion" to love again.


© Copyright 2000 Le Capitan de L'Amour - All Rights Reserved
StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
1 posted 2000-07-22 06:51 PM


I'm sorry that this girl broke your heart! I hope that you'll be able to love again. Eventually it won't hurt as much! Keep your head up and e-mail me if you ever wanna talk. Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

remember...

Time in it's own essence can heal even the deepest of wounds--icluding the heart. Scars will remain, yes I know, and that's just the way it is. But with time, you'll be able to love again and be happy yet again.



*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
2 posted 2000-07-22 08:08 PM




P.S. Welcome To Passions!!




*~* I wIsH I wAs A
LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn;
SkInNeD kNeEs AnD
bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE
eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a
BrOkEn HeArT!*~*


Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-07-22 11:54 PM


Welcome to Passions Le Capitan de L'Amour!

Many powerful swings of emotion in this
verse ... hope to read more!  

Check your e-mail for a special message.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-12-02 08:31 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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