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the dark angel
Junior Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 37


0 posted 2000-07-22 04:10 PM



This is for the guy of my dreams. He knows who he is, and who I am.

As Darkness surrounds me
I long for your embarce
You softly say my name
causing my hear to race.
Your tentative touch
Your warm embrace,
Your soft lips gently brush
my waiting face.
I close my eyes
and smile at your sweet taste
But then I realise
You aren't there.
You're just a dream.
And you left without a trace.

Love you.
Lee
-x-

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StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
1 posted 2000-07-22 06:26 PM


Dark Angel, this poem is lovely! I like the way you complete your thoughts so well. You did a sensational job and I do hope that whomever is lucky enough to be written about, will have the chance to read this! Best of luck! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-12-02 08:27 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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