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the dark angel
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since 05-10-2000
Posts 37


0 posted 07-22-2000 04:06 PM       View Profile for the dark angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the dark angel

Okies, these are just some poems I have scribbled in my notebook for my boyfriend but they are the way i feel towards him. Plus, we are getting married next year!
Okay the first one was when we broke up for a bit and i hurt so much, i cried every night.

I really hate to hurt you
I really hate to make you sad
Because whatever I say to you
I feel the consequence too
Because I'm bound to you
In a certain special way
That makes me love you even more
Every single day.


Okay next one was when I first wanted to go out with him. I wrote this on the back of a sale ticket at work and shoved it in his locker. It worked!

Sounds as soft as a prayer
But cuts as deep as a bullet
It can take you places you've never been
It could take you places you'd never wanna go
But then, the choice is yours
And when you're ready
I'll be waiting to take you there

© Copyright 2000 the dark angel - All Rights Reserved
StarPryncess17
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since 05-31-2000
Posts 944
Colorado


1 posted 07-22-2000 06:29 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

The first was filled
with such sorrow, and I'm
glad to hear things are better now~
the second was sweet and
definately a sign of
love. Keep up the
good work!
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~

p.s. Good luck in your marriage!



*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*
Lovely_Kris
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since 07-11-2000
Posts 178


2 posted 07-23-2000 11:49 AM       View Profile for Lovely_Kris   Email Lovely_Kris   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lovely_Kris

very good and i realy liked your poem. And i hope things go well for you.

Lovely_Kris
Chel
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since 07-01-2000
Posts 516
Baltimore, MD, USA


3 posted 07-24-2000 09:34 AM       View Profile for Chel   Email Chel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chel

Hey there, this poem was very well written.  The first one was sad, and the second touched my heart.  I am glad everything is well again.  And Congrats on your marriage!!!

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"
Vball Chickie1624
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since 05-14-2000
Posts 119
New York


4 posted 07-24-2000 11:01 AM       View Profile for Vball Chickie1624   Email Vball Chickie1624   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Vball Chickie1624's Home Page   View IP for Vball Chickie1624

Those are very good poems.  I wish you good luck with your marriage...keep writing and have fun!

Love ya
Danielle  

"Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you
Artic Wind
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since 09-16-2007
Posts 8075
Realm of Supernatural


5 posted 12-02-2007 08:33 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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