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the dark angel
Junior Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 37


0 posted 2000-07-22 04:06 PM


Okies, these are just some poems I have scribbled in my notebook for my boyfriend but they are the way i feel towards him. Plus, we are getting married next year!
Okay the first one was when we broke up for a bit and i hurt so much, i cried every night.

I really hate to hurt you
I really hate to make you sad
Because whatever I say to you
I feel the consequence too
Because I'm bound to you
In a certain special way
That makes me love you even more
Every single day.


Okay next one was when I first wanted to go out with him. I wrote this on the back of a sale ticket at work and shoved it in his locker. It worked!

Sounds as soft as a prayer
But cuts as deep as a bullet
It can take you places you've never been
It could take you places you'd never wanna go
But then, the choice is yours
And when you're ready
I'll be waiting to take you there


© Copyright 2000 the dark angel - All Rights Reserved
StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
1 posted 2000-07-22 06:29 PM


The first was filled
with such sorrow, and I'm
glad to hear things are better now~
the second was sweet and
definately a sign of
love. Keep up the
good work!
Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~

p.s. Good luck in your marriage!



*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

Lovely_Kris
Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176

2 posted 2000-07-23 11:49 AM


very good and i realy liked your poem. And i hope things go well for you.

Lovely_Kris

Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
3 posted 2000-07-24 09:34 AM


Hey there, this poem was very well written.  The first one was sad, and the second touched my heart.  I am glad everything is well again.  And Congrats on your marriage!!!

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Vball Chickie1624
Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116
New York
4 posted 2000-07-24 11:01 AM


Those are very good poems.  I wish you good luck with your marriage...keep writing and have fun!

Love ya
Danielle  

"Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-12-02 08:33 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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