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Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
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Mullica Hill, New Jersey

0 posted 2000-07-22 02:43 PM


I didnt write this a friend of mine did so i take no credit i just thought you would like to read it is is beautiful he wants to make it a song that is why there is like a chours type thing he doesnt think it is very good but i do

I've been waiting so long to feel your kiss again
All those nights I wondered aimless and out of my head
Will it always be this way, you and me in this night
Will it always be this way, will it always be this night
You never look as beautiful as you did way back then
And I'll never look at you, no I'll never look at you with those dool eyes again, my doll eyes again
Will it always be this way, you and me in this night
Will it always be this way, will it always be this night
I kissed you in the door way my eyes close tight and i cannot see
I kissed you good night and you kissed me good bye soon enough you'd leave me

© Copyright 2000 Gin Leigh - All Rights Reserved
StarPryncess17
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
1 posted 2000-07-22 06:23 PM


Your friend has a talent that could turn to much much more...


*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

liqwidnik
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since 2000-11-04
Posts 33
Mantua, NJ, USA
2 posted 2000-12-31 03:07 PM


i can just imagine who wrote this. It's beuatiful and make sure you tell your friend that
Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2000-12-31 05:31 PM


Great one here. I liked it a lot.


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14
Posts 375
Maine, USA
4 posted 2000-12-31 06:47 PM


I think you need to tell your friend to shout "move over eminem... here i come"  LOL  j/k but no seriously i love this! he is talented HEHEHE

*do not offer yourself to the world, yet let the world offer itself to you*--Me :)

Melster
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 442
Brisbane, Qld, Australia
5 posted 2001-01-01 12:57 PM


Your friend has done a great job...  

Melz!!


Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

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