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I Must Be Alive
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I Must Be Alive |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A 
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I Must Be Alive So many moons ago... or so it seems to be, the memories we we making were killed in front of me. Trudging along painfuly, I cleared the tailwind of all storm you unleashed and all the hell they bring. Still I can not run fast enough to hide from all that you have left for me to keep inside. Memories we were making. Memories choked to death. Ghost are all they are and all that we have left. Glancing from a distance, one may think I lived. But seen by those up close, is death and loss within. Life dwells still inside me, strange as it may seem. Now, here I am... writing about my dreams. Jeremy D. Halstead 7-22-00 "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
This was a really good poem!!! I really did like it.. It is kind of spooky how one can find themselves in such a mess then wake up to find it was just a dream!!! Great poem, hope to see more.. Love ya, cutie |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Jeremy this poem was so wonderful! I think you just found a turning point. I'll explain later. I always enjoy your work, so keep me wanting more. And about this situation, keep your head up and just remember that I AM HERE!! Love ya my hubby!!   Love Always- ~*~PryncessJess~*~ *~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~* |
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Vball Chickie1624 Member
since 2000-05-14
Posts 116New York |
hey...once again...great poem. Keep writing and have fun. Love ya Danielle "Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you |
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Jacman Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291Dwight Il, US |
Hey bud, let me guess.... It starts with an L, and ends with a Y. Am I good or am I good. Sorry you still deal with this, and I know I didn't help very much but you know I love you man. Jason If my face becomes sincere: Beware. And if I close my mind in fear: Please pry it open. And when I start to come undone: Stitch me togethor. And |
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MidnightPoet New Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 2 |
Beautiful poem, very well written. I have definately felt this way before . . . Good job! -MidnightPoet a.k.a. Heidi |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
The more I read and the more I talk to you the more I just wish I could be there by you..*didn't mean to make that rhyme* wow..that poem..I can feel my heart throbbing again *sigh* and my eyes aching with tears..I can really relate to that poem, especially lastnight, I started to write a poem like that..but you did it better, I'm glad you wrote it and not me cos it would have sucked major golf balls =Þ Anywho I'm writing this for support and love and stuff, but I'm no good at that, I try..I just want to let you know that I love you and I'm here for you, well atleast in spirit and over the phone.. Eternally yours, Kris "Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night" ~Crash and Burn~ |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Very good Jeremy, as always! You are waaaaaaay too good at this! Always keep your chin up my friend...and just remember everything happens for a reason. Keep up the writing Bel |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
This a great poem. Just keep your head up. Everything will work itself out in the end. Keep up the good work. I love your work, they just get better and better. Talk to you later. Chel "True friends stab you in the front" "Always do your best, you will always succeed" |
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TAP2 Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 211Morris, Il USA |
Jeremy, As alwayz, moving and inspiratonal. Lovely thoughts and sentiments here, the pain you still feel showing through in every line. Hope you're dealing with it better now than before. Alwayz, Thomas A. Plemmons "I could have missed the pain But I'd of had to miss The Dance" -Garth Brooks- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
jeremy what can i say...you leave me speechless with your beautiful poems...keep up the good work...im a big fan of yours...by the way where have you been lately??? i havent seen you online in awhile...read your mail...i sent you some good jokes... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Dreams or not, keep writing Jeremy With such good stuff, would be my pleasure to keep on reading... regards, sudhir |
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FoxyGirl Junior Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 17 |
Jeremy, once again a great poem. keep writing. I really enjoy ur poems. Jenn |
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