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sherm
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since 07-21-2000
Posts 94
Evansville,IN


0 posted 07-22-2000 03:27 AM       View Profile for sherm   Email sherm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sherm

I wasnt looking for love
or anything at all
planned to stay a stone
to build up a wall

but there you were
putting a sparkle in my eye
you shined with something special
I noticed a new star up in the sky

it was brighter than all the rest
and glowed in a different way
it sparkled like no other
there was just nothing to say

then my wall fell down
and the rock turned to dust
theres nothing left of them
since i gave you all my love and trust

and I give them to you forever
to hold onto tight
I want to spend my life with you
every second of every day and night


i wrote this about my current girlfriend because we got together soon after i broke up with my ex(2 years together) and i was planning to stay alone but couldnt resist how great she was
© Copyright 2000 Geoff A. Anderson - All Rights Reserved
cutie2005
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since 04-30-2000
Posts 150
Bennett, Colorado USA


1 posted 07-22-2000 11:17 AM       View Profile for cutie2005   Email cutie2005   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cutie2005

This was a very nice poem, and i really hope you and the new girl work out...!!! 2 years that is a long time, hope you can work out of it!!!
  Love ya,
   cutie
Erin
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since 06-15-2000
Posts 2681
~Chicago~


2 posted 07-22-2000 01:56 PM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

this is a really good poem...whoever the girl is must be really special...keep up the good work and good luck with the girl...by the way do you mind if i copy it???

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~
StarPryncess17
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since 05-31-2000
Posts 944
Colorado


3 posted 07-22-2000 02:02 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

Such a heartfelt poem Sherm! This girl must be very special! I hope everything works  out for you two!! Keep up the wonderful work. Love Always~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*
sherm
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since 07-21-2000
Posts 94
Evansville,IN


4 posted 07-23-2000 02:19 AM       View Profile for sherm   Email sherm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sherm

erin - sure, you can copy it
AngelShell
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since 03-01-2000
Posts 526
not heaven nor hell so...


5 posted 07-23-2000 02:37 AM       View Profile for AngelShell   Email AngelShell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AngelShell

Wow!!
Great poem, I hope that you let her read this, it must be so great to have someone in your life that you feel this strongly about, I hope you two stay together for a long time.

Love Always,
Shell.

Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
~Beautiful~
~Creed~
Lani_DarkOne
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since 05-28-2000
Posts 152
UK


6 posted 07-24-2000 01:32 PM       View Profile for Lani_DarkOne   Email Lani_DarkOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lani_DarkOne

Great poem...like your imagery, esp. the first verse, sounds just like me  
Keep posting... a bit late..but Welcome to Passions..i haven't been here for a while.



"Controlling my feelings for too long....
And forcing our darkest souls to unfold...
And pushing us into self-destruction...."
*~Muse*~
Vball Chickie1624
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since 05-14-2000
Posts 119
New York


7 posted 07-24-2000 02:27 PM       View Profile for Vball Chickie1624   Email Vball Chickie1624   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Vball Chickie1624's Home Page   View IP for Vball Chickie1624

hey...that was a beautiful poem...i love your poetry...keep writing and have fun!!

Love ya
Danielle  

It takes a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like them, a day to love them, and a lifetime to forget them.
Dedicated to: MD
LyricFetish
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since 01-13-2000
Posts 515
North Carolina


8 posted 07-24-2000 04:00 PM       View Profile for LyricFetish   Email LyricFetish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LyricFetish

Really cool poem, proves there are still guys out there who listen to their hearts! I hope someone will say those things about me sometime.      
Peace dude.

*~Meredith~*

It's so obvious
That the promise
Keeps me here
Painting pictures where
All the colors
Disappear
*Lit
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 09-16-2007
Posts 8075
Realm of Supernatural


9 posted 12-03-2007 08:27 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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