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AngelShell
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since 03-01-2000
Posts 526
not heaven nor hell so...


0 posted 07-21-2000 11:13 PM       View Profile for AngelShell   Email AngelShell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for AngelShell

In the heat of the night,
I cover my head,
Hiding from words,
I thought would never be said.
You scream through tears,
I can’t believe my eyes,
My hero is crying,
Because of my lies.

I made a mistake,
I should have thought,
Before I put it into action,
I never believed I’d get caught.
But now my world,
Is tumbling down,
What ca I say,
To turn it around,
There’s nothing to say,
Nothing you’ll think true,
So now I know,
I must say goodbye to you.

Your tears stop like rain,
Being held in the sky,
Your disbelieving eyes,
Question me why.
I shake my head,
And stop for a while,
Then I lean in close,
And give him a smile.

‘You know why’,
I whisper in his ear,
‘It’s only because,
I know I can’t stay here.
I’m never at peace,
Thinking I might loose,
And it breaks my heart,
To think I might choose.
To leave you behind,
And walk out that door,
Never seeing you again,
And yet I know I want more.
I want you to hold me,
To tell me it’s alright,
That tomorrow will bring,
A new kind of light.
Only I know it’s not true,
It never will be,
But you’ll move on,
Just wait and see’.

So I pass through the door,
Putting this chapter on the shelf,
Knowing the only one to blame,
Is myself.




Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
~Beautiful~
~Creed~
© Copyright 2000 Michelle - All Rights Reserved
Euclid the Kid
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since 07-15-2000
Posts 51
Eugene,Oregon


1 posted 07-21-2000 11:22 PM       View Profile for Euclid the Kid   Email Euclid the Kid   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Euclid the Kid

Angel-( fallen one at that ) I feel for you-sad but great poem about love lost through ones own mistakes-but at least it ain't the end of the world--Life goes on!

                the Kid

I seek to be me-
and all I can be!
AngelShell
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since 03-01-2000
Posts 526
not heaven nor hell so...


2 posted 07-21-2000 11:42 PM       View Profile for AngelShell   Email AngelShell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AngelShell

I just thought that I would appologise in here as well.
I accidentally double posted my poem.
I didn't mean to (hangs head in shame).

Sooooo sorry.
AngelShell
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not heaven nor hell so...


3 posted 07-21-2000 11:44 PM       View Profile for AngelShell   Email AngelShell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AngelShell

By the way, thanks for your reply kid.
I know that life goes on, and it has for me.
Even though I wrote this poem only recently, the breakup happened a while ago.
I could only write about it now because of the pain I felt.
I ruined a great relationship because I couldn't committ to what he wanted.  And I also lied thinking I would benifit from it - how stupid can I get!!!

Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
~Beautiful~
~Creed~
BabyGirl1
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since 07-02-2000
Posts 91
Morris, IL


4 posted 07-21-2000 11:50 PM       View Profile for BabyGirl1   Email BabyGirl1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BabyGirl1

This was a wonderfully written poem.  You show so much emotions and feelings in your writing.  Committing is a hard thing to do.  Especially with all of the other temptations out there.  Just be true to yourself and others and you will soon be able to commit to the right one and he to you.

"We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other."

-Luciano de Crescenzo-
AngelShell
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Posts 526
not heaven nor hell so...


5 posted 07-21-2000 11:53 PM       View Profile for AngelShell   Email AngelShell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AngelShell

Great advice...thanks
sherm
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since 07-21-2000
Posts 94
Evansville,IN


6 posted 07-22-2000 03:18 AM       View Profile for sherm   Email sherm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sherm

Everyone makes mistakes but if its meant to be it happens and if not it brings pain but pain passes.
cutie2005
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since 04-30-2000
Posts 150
Bennett, Colorado USA


7 posted 07-22-2000 11:07 AM       View Profile for cutie2005   Email cutie2005   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cutie2005

Hey this was a great poem, but yet very sad. You did a good job putting it in such words, pretty much decribing your feelings..!! Loved it..
  Love ya,
   cutie
StarPryncess17
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since 05-31-2000
Posts 944
Colorado


8 posted 07-22-2000 06:48 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

Time in it's own essence can heal even the deepest of wounds--including the heart. Scars will remain, yes I know, and that's just the way it is. But with time, you'll be able to love again and be happy yet again...

Even if it was your fault, everyone makes mistakes. Forgive yourself and move on...just remember to learn from the mistakes you made.

Best of luck! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~




*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*
Artic Wind
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Posts 8075
Realm of Supernatural


9 posted 12-02-2007 08:28 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
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