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It doesn't matter no more

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Euclid the Kid
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since 07-15-2000
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Eugene,Oregon


0 posted 07-21-2000 11:02 PM       View Profile for Euclid the Kid   Email Euclid the Kid   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Euclid the Kid

There's a trial going on
And I'm caught up in the middle,
My mind says,"Just dismiss the case"
My heart-"hold out for acquittal."

She was the girl of my dreams
Became my heart's desire,
Unlike the others that I've known
She set my heart on fire.

For a while all was going well
Things worked out like a movie,
Then she said, "We're in a rut!"
(I thought things were groovy.)

My heart says don't lose her
For she is the one!
My mind says why bother--
She took away my fun!

Deep down I have feelings for her
Why must she make such waves?
So my mind tells me, I can do better
Just her float away.

The jury is still out
But the matter's decided,
And the tug of war goes on
Between heart and mind ununited.

She said "We are history!"
But my heart said --ignor
She's on moved without me in her life--
It doesn't matter no more.



I seek to be me-
and all I can be!
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AngelShell
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since 03-01-2000
Posts 526
not heaven nor hell so...


1 posted 07-21-2000 11:17 PM       View Profile for AngelShell   Email AngelShell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AngelShell

Wow!  A great poem, you should have had this one considered for the book.  I know I would have voted for it.
What a great idea to join both a  legal trial and the trials of love together.
It's great and I love it.
I'm glad that I can be the first one to post a reply.

You definately have a talent for writing and you should keep it up.

I hope that you will one day find that someone that can make you happy.

Love Always,
Shell

Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
~Beautiful~
~Creed~
sherm
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since 07-21-2000
Posts 94
Evansville,IN


2 posted 07-22-2000 03:08 AM       View Profile for sherm   Email sherm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sherm

I really like this poem. I felt the exact same way at times with my ex.
StarPryncess17
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since 05-31-2000
Posts 944
Colorado


3 posted 07-22-2000 07:05 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

Your thoughts fit perfectly into your trial analogy. AT times we all feel like this but it is how we truly deal with it that determines the verdict. Keep your head up.like I ALWAYS say :"Time in it's own essence can heal even the deepest of wounds--including the heart. Scars will remain, yes I know, and that's just the way it is. But with time, you'll be able to love again and be happy yet again." Love Always~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


4 posted 12-02-2007 08:29 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

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