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Will he?

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since 07-21-2000
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0 posted 07-21-2000 10:45 PM       View Profile for sherm   Email sherm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sherm

A young man battles on
struggling through the pain
his confidence is almost gone
you can barely see it if you strain
what shall he become
he asks the stars above
will he be old and lonesome
or be happy with a true love
will all his dreams come true
and make his life content
or even just one or two
to give his fears and worries vent
how many mistakes will he make
or different times will he sin
will his soul be full of lies so fake
or will his morals overcome and win
will his mind gain strength
and believe in himself once more
or will his failures grow in length
and push him down against the floor
will he lay there like a fool
and ball himself up in utter fear
crying himself up a pool
made from tear after tear
or will he stand against the world
and let out a mighty roar
that makes an iron beam grow curled
to say excuse me, do you have any more

i wrote this a while ago when i was still unhappily with my exgirlfriend and scared of the future
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not heaven nor hell so...

1 posted 07-21-2000 10:53 PM       View Profile for AngelShell   Email AngelShell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AngelShell

I am glad that I can be the first to post a reply.  Firstly I would like to welcome you to passions, this is a brilliant first post.
I hope that things worked out in the end and you are no longer feeling that uncertainty regardless of whether you two are still together (it says 'ex' so I suppose you're not).
Love can been a cruel thing.
But we have to learn to get on with our lives ant not let love run over us.

Keep up the great writing.

Love Always,

Beautiful is empty
Beautiful is free
Beautiful loves no one
Beautiful stripped me
Euclid the Kid
since 07-15-2000
Posts 51

2 posted 07-21-2000 11:16 PM       View Profile for Euclid the Kid   Email Euclid the Kid   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Euclid the Kid

Like I'm reading this and I'm thinking-gees how did this guy get inside my brain- my fears- my life?  This one really touches base in a lot of ways-keep up the great writing --you got my vote!

I seek to be me-
and all I can be!
Kit McCallum
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since 04-30-2000
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Ontario, Canada

3 posted 07-22-2000 08:47 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Welcome to Passions Sherm!

This is a wonderful first post,
full of questions and longing for answers.
Hope to read more!
Check your e-mail for a special message!  

Best wishes,
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4 posted 07-22-2000 06:56 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

I'm glad to hear that you are no longer unhappy sherm!! Keep up the writing, it helps doesn't it? Keep your head up and leave your eyes on your goals-what ever they might be. (because obstcales are those scary things we see when we take our eyes off our goals...right?) Best of luck my friend. Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

p.s. welcome to passions!!

*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*
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Realm of Supernatural

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