A young man battles on struggling through the pain his confidence is almost gone you can barely see it if you strain what shall he become he asks the stars above will he be old and lonesome or be happy with a true love will all his dreams come true and make his life content or even just one or two to give his fears and worries vent how many mistakes will he make or different times will he sin will his soul be full of lies so fake or will his morals overcome and win will his mind gain strength and believe in himself once more or will his failures grow in length and push him down against the floor will he lay there like a fool and ball himself up in utter fear crying himself up a pool made from tear after tear or will he stand against the world and let out a mighty roar that makes an iron beam grow curled to say excuse me, do you have any more
i wrote this a while ago when i was still unhappily with my exgirlfriend and scared of the future
I am glad that I can be the first to post a reply. Firstly I would like to welcome you to passions, this is a brilliant first post. I hope that things worked out in the end and you are no longer feeling that uncertainty regardless of whether you two are still together (it says 'ex' so I suppose you're not). Love can been a cruel thing. But we have to learn to get on with our lives ant not let love run over us.
Keep up the great writing.
Love Always, Shell.
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I'm glad to hear that you are no longer unhappy sherm!! Keep up the writing, it helps doesn't it? Keep your head up and leave your eyes on your goals-what ever they might be. (because obstcales are those scary things we see when we take our eyes off our goals...right?) Best of luck my friend. Love Always~*~Jessica~*~
p.s. welcome to passions!!
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