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Fairy Princess
Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 64
Fitchburg Ma, USA

0 posted 2000-07-21 01:05 PM


My shell is broken fially,
Now all love is welcome to come in,
So you better hurry up.

I see someone looking for love,
Not sure if he wants my love,
He'll come if he wants my love.

He wants my love but do I dare give him another chance?
Yes I will cause he's sad and I'm sad,
So we giving it another chance.

But then I say no I don't want you,
I hurt him and I he said "but I love you",
I said "yeah".

I pushed him way to far away from me this time,
I feel bad,
A couple days past were being nice I love him again.

So he said "Minna I love you" I say it back,
But do I dare ask him if were going to hurt,
Please come back to me I say "maybe"

Hours past I say "Hey Dave I'll go back out",
We are both smiling I don't know how to say sorry,
For what I did do he says "you don't have to be".

Now I'm happy,
Now your happy,
Lets see how long this will last.

It's been 2 months that we've broken up,
I'm happy and we haven't been fighting,
Just forgiving and understanding each other.

             Love Always,
               ~*~Minna~*~    



~*~What you see is what
you get~*~

© Copyright 2000 Minna - All Rights Reserved
StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
1 posted 2000-07-22 02:05 PM


Nicely done Minna! Keep it up! you have a wonderful talent here utilize it! Hope everything works out with the two of you! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-12-02 08:27 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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