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Euclid the Kid
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since 2000-07-15
Posts 51
Eugene,Oregon

0 posted 2000-07-21 06:57 AM


I always seem in the wrong lane
at the worse of times,
and it's hard getting over
there's always such a line!

If I'm in the fast lane
a red light just waits foe me,
to slow me down and hinder
me from making good speed.

Life is so complicated
which lane should I be in?
Finally, when I've figured it out--
I need to change lanes again.

I'm such for life's road map
I'm fumbling with my keys,
I know I'm stalled in the wrong lane
So would you be patient, please!



I seek to be me-
and all I can be!

© Copyright 2000 Euclid the Kid - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-07-21 07:07 AM


LOL ... Thanks for the wonderful smile to start the morning Euclid! Great poem!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Crystalina123
Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228

2 posted 2000-07-21 09:01 AM


Too Cute -- and the story of my life. I like this one!!!


Crystal

When a door closes, another door of oppurtunity opens. The only problem is that most of us are so busy looking at the closed door that we fail to see

Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
3 posted 2000-07-21 09:04 AM


Great poem.  Keep up the good work.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Lady Lost
Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470

4 posted 2000-07-21 09:07 AM


I cam across your poem and I think you are a wonderful writer!  Even though I am no longer a teenager (I wish I still was!) I can relate.  After some time, the road starts to even out...you learn how to operate the cruise control and you start to enjoy the scenery..It'll happen soon, I promise!

You can never have too much fiction; reality can be such a bore

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
5 posted 2000-07-22 07:37 PM


Indeed one to smile about. I know how you feel. So just be like me--when you don't know what lane to be in, just drive right down the middle. ok so it makes people angry, but they'll get over it...right? hehe. Keep it up! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A
LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn;
SkInNeD kNeEs AnD
bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE
eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a
BrOkEn HeArT!*~*


Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
6 posted 2007-12-02 08:30 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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