The guy I could could dream of

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Brogan
New Member

since 2000-07-21

Posts 1

0 posted 2000-07-21 03:37 AM

The guy I could only Dream of...........
Is tall, Has Bright blue eyes, and dark brown hair.
Takes me out were I want to go. Has a car not made yet. Has a house the does all the work for you. Want a 5 course meal there it is.
Has clothes that no one else has. Has a creadit card with no limit. Has a priavate Jet.
When you go to bed you can change anything in it. Need to change the paint on the wall to make it match a picture you just got. Change it.
Has a drink you can't buy anywere else. Has food never been tasted before.
The best looking guy you can find.
He is the the man of my Dreams...........

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

1 posted 2000-07-21 03:51 AM

Hi!  Welcome to Passions.
First of all I would like to say that I hope you enjoy your time here, there are a lot of great poems to browse through and there are some poets on here with real talent.

Now, your poem was nice.  It told us a lot about what your 'dream man' was going to be like.
Just a sugestion.  Next time, try to include a few of your emotions into your poem.  It will give it a lot more kick.
But it was an excellent poem none the less, and a gret first post.
Keep it up.

Love Always,
Shell.

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2000-07-21 06:19 AM

Welcome to Passions Brogan!

Quite a dream man you've described! I'd like to see that house myself, nice imagery. As long as your home is filled with love ... this would be a happy home indeed.

Hope to read more! Check your e-mail for a special message.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

3 posted 2000-07-21 09:20 AM

Welcome to Passions!!! Great first post. Very interesting. Keep up the good work, and I hope to read more soon.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

4 posted 2000-07-22 07:32 PM

Welcome to Passions!!

This was a very heartfelt first post! I often wonder where the man of my dreams can be found...other than in my dreams. Guess I'll have to keep wondering...huh?

Hope to see more from you soon. Keep it up

Love Always
~*~Jessica~*~

*~* I wIsH I wAs A
LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn;
SkInNeD kNeEs AnD
bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE
eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a
BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-12-02 08:30 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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