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0 posted 07-20-2000 08:41 PM       View Profile for Ender   Email Ender   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Ender's Home Page   View IP for Ender

I cant stop thinking of you
Your beauty captivating my mind
Surrounding it
Filling it with dreams
About you
I cant seem to think about anything else
Nothing strays my mind
From you

You are everything to me
My world around me
And inside of me
You are peace
Everything that counts
Everything that make you who you are

I want to be with you
Your voice captivates my heart
Your love controls my thoughts
You are the goddess of love
The queen of beauty

You are of a rare type
Not many like you
Which makes you more beautiful
And more priceless
A buried treasure
Unlike any in the world today

I am glad I found you
I grateful to know you
I am lucky to share your love

*I am not one to be feared. I am one that should be loved forever. -Ender*
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1 posted 07-20-2000 10:13 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

A happy story Ender, glad to hear you are in love! It is such a wonderful thing and I hope that you are genuinely happy with your new found treasure. Keep up the wonderful writing, and best of luck to you in life and love!!   Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*
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not heaven nor hell so...

2 posted 07-21-2000 04:12 AM       View Profile for AngelShell   Email AngelShell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AngelShell

I don't think that there is anything I can say other than WOW!!!!!!!!!!
That poem is most likely one of the best I have read in the past few days, and I have been cramming my mind full of poetry.
There are so many feelings and expressions in this poem that some of us can only drem of feeling all at one time.
I'm glad that you have found someone that can make you feel like that.
My advice now is to not let her go!!
But you have to keep up the great writing I will look forward to reading more from you.

Love Always,
Kit McCallum
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3 posted 07-21-2000 06:26 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Wow!  Beautiful poem Ender!  The recipient of your love is one very lucky lady indeed ... I hope you were able to share this treasure with her! Wonderful!

Best wishes,
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4 posted 07-21-2000 09:09 AM       View Profile for Chel   Email Chel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chel

Great poem once again.  Keep it up.


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"
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5 posted 07-21-2000 03:48 PM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

just like a fairy tale...with a very happy ending...keep up the good work...

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6 posted 12-02-2007 08:26 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind


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