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Ender
Member

since 1999-12-08

Posts 200
Yuma, AZ USA

0 posted 2000-07-20 08:41 PM

I cant stop thinking of you
Your beauty captivating my mind
Surrounding it
Filling it with dreams
Fantasies
About you
I cant seem to think about anything else
Nothing strays my mind
From you

You are everything to me
My world around me
And inside of me
You are peace
Love
Beauty
Everything that counts
Everything that make you who you are

I want to be with you
Your voice captivates my heart
Your love controls my thoughts
You are the goddess of love
The queen of beauty

You are of a rare type
Not many like you
Which makes you more beautiful
And more priceless
A buried treasure
Unlike any in the world today

I am glad I found you
I grateful to know you
I am lucky to share your love

*I am not one to be feared. I am one that should be loved forever. -Ender*

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

1 posted 2000-07-20 10:13 PM

A happy story Ender, glad to hear you are in love! It is such a wonderful thing and I hope that you are genuinely happy with your new found treasure. Keep up the wonderful writing, and best of luck to you in life and love!!

Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

2 posted 2000-07-21 04:12 AM

I don't think that there is anything I can say other than WOW!!!!!!!!!!
That poem is most likely one of the best I have read in the past few days, and I have been cramming my mind full of poetry.
There are so many feelings and expressions in this poem that some of us can only drem of feeling all at one time.
I'm glad that you have found someone that can make you feel like that.
My advice now is to not let her go!!
But you have to keep up the great writing I will look forward to reading more from you.

Love Always,
Shell

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2000-07-21 06:26 AM

Wow! Beautiful poem Ender! The recipient of your love is one very lucky lady indeed ... I hope you were able to share this treasure with her! Wonderful!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Chel
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA

4 posted 2000-07-21 09:09 AM

Great poem once again. Keep it up.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

5 posted 2000-07-21 03:48 PM

just like a fairy tale...with a very happy ending...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-12-02 08:26 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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