Hey Mel great poem, but it made me sad and it made me think about what people have and don't realize it until its gone from our reach. Thanks,,,,, and thanks for your response to my poem and t was fiction
not heaven nor hell so...
Yeah, a nice poem even though it was a little sad. But what we have to realize is that there will be another and even thought it sounds harsh 'there are plenty more fish in the sea'. Believe that and it doesn't feel so bad.
Love Always, Shell.
Baltimore, MD, USA
Hey Mel, this was indeed a sad poem. It is very disheartening when we can no longer find in our hearts the love that we had once lived and longed for. I definately hope that you plan on moving on and stop the pain. Keep writing! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~
*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/US
Mel i always love reading your poetry even tho they are usualy sad and bitter they make me smile cos i love to see the sheer talent you have for writing! Im not really sure who this is about but i have a good guess....i dunno why youd waste your talent writing a poem about him tho!! keep em coming chick!! Love Ya Bunches ~Jen~
The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle