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Fairy Princess
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 64
Fitchburg Ma, USA

0 posted 2000-07-20 01:33 AM


Good bye
Jess where do I start you've been so nice.


Today we say good bye all memories will last,
Today we say good bye and see you later,
Today we say good bye to each other.

We laugh and laugh and laugh,
I say "Jess why are you leaving"?
You say nothing "I'll keep in touch",

Our plane is almost landing here our memories remain,
We say "GOOD JOB" for winning all 1st places,
I say "Jess you'll never be forgotten"
You say "you won't either".

Now where'd our memories go,
I guess they left us I don't remember you as much,
I wonder "is she really leaving me?".

So here I am writing this email to a "friend",
And hoping one day you'll find this poem,
So all I can say now is "GOOD BYE"

Your Friend,

~*~Minna~*~

  


((Peace out))
~*~Fairy Princess~*~

© Copyright 2000 Minna - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-07-20 07:41 PM


Such a sad farewell ... and very nicely written Minna! Hope you can find each other and say hello again somewhere down the road.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
2 posted 2000-07-20 10:33 PM


Once again, I find myself agreeing with Kit, nicely done and such a sad message! I hope that you two find eachtother again someday. Best of luck!! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-12-02 08:23 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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