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Girl In My Dreams

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Alex Sankowich
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since 07-17-2000
Posts 28
North Carolina, USA


0 posted 07-20-2000 01:28 AM       View Profile for Alex Sankowich   Email Alex Sankowich   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Alex Sankowich's Home Page   View IP for Alex Sankowich

Well...last poem before I get to the beach.  I've always wanted to write about the girl in my dreams.  Good Lord, I'm getting goosebumps about writing this.  I saw Bristol for years in my dreams....then I finally met her.  Damn, whoa...*has major goosebumps*


"Girl In My Dreams"

There you were
Wild and free
Reaching out like you needed me
With your beautiful hair
Looking so proud standing there
Looking at me
You have been what I seen
You are the girl in my dreams
When I first saw you
I thought I was in heaven
I saw love
You were smiling
Your eyes were like the sunshine
And when I thought about it
I knew then and there
You would be mine
As beautiful as it seems,
You are the girl in my dreams
You are beautiful
For years I have seen you
And it was awesome by all means
For years I have wanted to know you
Every night in my dreams
I could feel your gentle hands caressing me
Every night in my dreams
I could hear your sweet voice whispering to me
For years you have been the girl in my dreams
I have finally found you
And baby, still, it seems like a dream
You with that long, brown hair
Looking so beautiful standing there
Come to me, baby
For love is something we both will bare
You opened the door
And it isn't a dream any more
You have been the girl in my dreams
And now it's reality, or so it seems



--
"True love lasts forever."
"Heroes will get remembered, but legends will never die."





[This message has been edited by Alex Sankowich (edited 07-20-2000).]
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Chel
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since 07-01-2000
Posts 516
Baltimore, MD, USA


1 posted 07-20-2000 07:20 AM       View Profile for Chel   Email Chel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chel

Alex,
  I loved it.  I hope you share this with her.  Keep up the good work.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"
TrueLUV
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since 07-19-2000
Posts 163
Connecticut, U.S.A.


2 posted 07-20-2000 09:54 AM       View Profile for TrueLUV   Email TrueLUV   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TrueLUV

Alex, You have a talent to express true emotion keep it up loved the poem
Fairy Princess
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since 07-19-2000
Posts 65
Fitchburg Ma, USA


3 posted 07-20-2000 11:38 AM       View Profile for Fairy Princess   Email Fairy Princess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Fairy Princess's Home Page   View IP for Fairy Princess

Hey that sounds like my poem THE BOY IN MY DREAMS. Thats a really good poem I like it.
      ~*~Minna~*~    


((Peace out))
~*~Fairy Princess~*~
StarPryncess17
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4 posted 07-21-2000 12:35 AM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

Nicely done Alex!!I hope she reads this because it is beautiful!! I'm glad you have found the girl from your dreams!! Best of luck to you! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*
Erin
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since 06-15-2000
Posts 2681
~Chicago~


5 posted 07-21-2000 03:39 PM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

this is a beautiful poem...and whoever this girl is should read this...you should let her know just how special she is to you...i dont know what color you used but i had to highlight the whole poem just to read it...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~
Alex Sankowich
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since 07-17-2000
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North Carolina, USA


6 posted 07-25-2000 05:56 PM       View Profile for Alex Sankowich   Email Alex Sankowich   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Alex Sankowich's Home Page   View IP for Alex Sankowich

Heh...I modified the HTML code to get the color....heh, and if you have the font, the font should have been Galant, and not Arial.  Oh by the way, I'm home from the beach.

--
"True love lasts forever."
"Heroes will get remembered, but legends will never die."

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


7 posted 12-03-2007 08:28 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
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