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Alex Sankowich
Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 28
North Carolina, USA

0 posted 2000-07-20 01:28 AM


Well...last poem before I get to the beach.  I've always wanted to write about the girl in my dreams.  Good Lord, I'm getting goosebumps about writing this.  I saw Bristol for years in my dreams....then I finally met her.  Damn, whoa...*has major goosebumps*


"Girl In My Dreams"

There you were
Wild and free
Reaching out like you needed me
With your beautiful hair
Looking so proud standing there
Looking at me
You have been what I seen
You are the girl in my dreams
When I first saw you
I thought I was in heaven
I saw love
You were smiling
Your eyes were like the sunshine
And when I thought about it
I knew then and there
You would be mine
As beautiful as it seems,
You are the girl in my dreams
You are beautiful
For years I have seen you
And it was awesome by all means
For years I have wanted to know you
Every night in my dreams
I could feel your gentle hands caressing me
Every night in my dreams
I could hear your sweet voice whispering to me
For years you have been the girl in my dreams
I have finally found you
And baby, still, it seems like a dream
You with that long, brown hair
Looking so beautiful standing there
Come to me, baby
For love is something we both will bare
You opened the door
And it isn't a dream any more
You have been the girl in my dreams
And now it's reality, or so it seems

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--
"True love lasts forever."
"Heroes will get remembered, but legends will never die."





[This message has been edited by Alex Sankowich (edited 07-20-2000).]

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Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
1 posted 2000-07-20 07:20 AM


Alex,
  I loved it.  I hope you share this with her.  Keep up the good work.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

TrueLUV
Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.
2 posted 2000-07-20 09:54 AM


Alex, You have a talent to express true emotion keep it up loved the poem
Fairy Princess
Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 64
Fitchburg Ma, USA
3 posted 2000-07-20 11:38 AM


Hey that sounds like my poem THE BOY IN MY DREAMS. Thats a really good poem I like it.
      ~*~Minna~*~    


((Peace out))
~*~Fairy Princess~*~

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
4 posted 2000-07-21 12:35 PM


Nicely done Alex!!I hope she reads this because it is beautiful!! I'm glad you have found the girl from your dreams!! Best of luck to you! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*

Erin
Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
5 posted 2000-07-21 03:39 PM


this is a beautiful poem...and whoever this girl is should read this...you should let her know just how special she is to you...i dont know what color you used but i had to highlight the whole poem just to read it...keep up the good work...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

Alex Sankowich
Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 28
North Carolina, USA
6 posted 2000-07-25 05:56 PM


Heh...I modified the HTML code to get the color....heh, and if you have the font, the font should have been Galant, and not Arial.  Oh by the way, I'm home from the beach.

--
"True love lasts forever."
"Heroes will get remembered, but legends will never die."


Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2007-12-03 08:28 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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