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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
why am I in love with a girl who treats me so badly Why am I in love with a girl who makes me feel so sadly When I trun around then you come back around still tearing away at my heart knowing it's my weakest possesion All my friends say let her go, but all my friends just don't know they can't possibly realize how this one girl steals my heart and leaves me in demise leaving me sad and ready to cry. |
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HerMelness Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 37Bridgewater, NS, Canada |
TrueLUV... i've read alot of your responses to others.. and you seem like a really sweet guy.. so hopefully this is fiction.. you deserve someone way better than that.. but either way.. a very expressive piece. =) -Mel- -Wherever you go, go with all your heart.- |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lovely and sad poem from the heart TruLuv. I hope you're able to find someone who will appreciate you for "you"!  Keep up the great writing!Best wishes, /Kit |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Obviously this girl DOES NOT know what she is missing out on. And even if she does, she is crazy for treating you so unfairly. I know what it is like to be in your position because I am in the same exact situation. I hope that you'll be able to find a girl who does deserve your devotion!! Best of luck and keep your head up!! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ p.s. I am very good at listening and I am good at giving advice, and since I'm in your situation, I understand--so if you ever wanna talk about it, I'd love to help if I can, just e-mail me at StarPryncess17@hotmail.com *~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~* |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
Unfortunealty I have been on both the recieving and the giving end of pain such as this. I have to say that I was on the latter side first, and I have to say that it is not something to be proud of. When I finally got on the recieving end I had to ring that guy up and appologise, I just didn't realize it hurt so much. I guess I should have opened my eyes and seen what was in fron of me, what I was causing. I hope that she realizes what she is doing. I read one of your other poems. I'm not sure what it was called but it struck something inside of me that I find only few poems can do. You always manage to get to the heart of things. Keep it up, your writing is great. Love Always, Shell. |
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heartbroken New Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 9 |
From your poems you seem like a really nice guy to me, and i think you can do alot better. You deserve alot better!! Goodluck!  ) |
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LoveLess1 New Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 5 |
In my opinion your friends don't know but if she is hurting that badly i think u should just let go of her. It might hurt but it wil be the best thing. |
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thebeautybrat Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114Florida |
i agree with love less!! this is a great poem!! i hope to read more by you!! It is better to have loved and lost, than to never have loved at all. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
i am sorry you feel this way...we all have felt this way at least one point in our lives...keep your head up...one day this will all change... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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Gossamerwings Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 207 |
No one deserves to be treated like this. Love isn't supposed to hurt.Hang in there, you will meet someone who deserves your love and cares for you as much as you care for her. Gossamerwings ;) |
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FairyPrincess Junior Member
since 2000-07-26
Posts 25 |
In order for a relationship to work both people have to give love. you should let her go and find someone who will treat you right. |
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FoxyGirl Junior Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 17 |
hey, I'm sorry its not working between you and your girlfriend. I think if she doesn't treat you right u should find someone that loves you as much as you love her. Jenn |
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