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I'll Be The One

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Alex Sankowich
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since 07-17-2000
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North Carolina, USA


0 posted 07-19-2000 09:14 PM       View Profile for Alex Sankowich   Email Alex Sankowich   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Alex Sankowich's Home Page   View IP for Alex Sankowich

Yes, inspired by Backstreet Boys' "The One," I'm writing one like it...but much different....and in my opinion, this one sucks.  These are feelings.

"I'll Be The One"

You are here for me when you can
I am there for you when I can
You'll be the one to kiss me
I'll be the one to hold you
You'll be the one to take my hand
I'll be the one that will be able to lead you in any direction
If you never say "I love you"
I'll be the one to say it
I'll be the one to take you where you want to
Let love take us where it leads us
I'll be the one to love you
I'll be the one to cherish you
I'll be the one to kiss you
I'll be the one to be there when I can
Take my hand....
And I'll be the one
To lead you to eternity


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"True love lasts forever."
"Heroes will get remembered, but legends will never die."

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Chel
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since 07-01-2000
Posts 516
Baltimore, MD, USA


1 posted 07-19-2000 09:17 PM       View Profile for Chel   Email Chel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chel

Hey there, I thought this was a great poem.  I really did like it.  Keep up the good work.  I wanted to be the first person to respond to it.  Nice talking to you earlier hope to do it again.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"
Alex Sankowich
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since 07-17-2000
Posts 28
North Carolina, USA


2 posted 07-19-2000 09:24 PM       View Profile for Alex Sankowich   Email Alex Sankowich   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Alex Sankowich's Home Page   View IP for Alex Sankowich

Hehe, thanks.  Took me only 10 minutes to write...heh.  Sometimes it's really easy to write, then other times, hard as hell.  But umm, I may not be posting til Monday or Tuesday because I'm gone to the beach!  Woohoo!  Later.


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"True love lasts forever."
"Heroes will get remembered, but legends will never die."

Phoebee
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since 07-09-2000
Posts 42
Peoria, AZ


3 posted 07-19-2000 11:49 PM       View Profile for Phoebee   Email Phoebee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Phoebee

Once again, I love the poem.  Don't be so hard on yourself.  You have a talent.

"Everything happens for a reason!"
AngelShell
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since 03-01-2000
Posts 526
not heaven nor hell so...


4 posted 07-21-2000 05:13 AM       View Profile for AngelShell   Email AngelShell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AngelShell

A very nice poem.
You obviously feel very strongly about this person, I don't think that you should let them go.

Keep up the great writing.

Love Always,
Shell.

When I'm dreaming I'm guided through another world
Time and time again
At sunruse I fight to stay alseep
'Cause I don't want to leave the comfort o
Artic Wind
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since 09-16-2007
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Realm of Supernatural


5 posted 12-02-2007 08:24 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
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