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Longing for Love

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0 posted 07-19-2000 09:05 PM       View Profile for tearsinheaven   Email tearsinheaven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tearsinheaven

Longing for Love

I have long yet waited
For a beautiful woman to love
This feeing I have inside
Lingurs for my one true love
I've tried and tried to love
Many, many times before
But nothing ever worked out
My delicate heart always tore
I wish to find someone
Loving, caring and kind
I hope she comes to me soon
Or I may lose my mind
I want to feel the love
I see everywhere I go
All those couples in love
This I want to know
I'm sure she'll come
Either tomorrow or in a year
But what if she doesn't come
That's my greatest fear
Escaping this brutal pain
Is my only dream
And walking next to her
Under a warm moon beam
All those nights waisted
Crying endlessly in my bed
And if I do not find her
I think I'd rather be dead
I want to be able
To dream of her at night
And having her be my
First and last sight
Waking up next to her
Is a fantasy in itself
And to look at her face
In a picture on the shelf

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since 07-12-2000
Posts 37
Bridgewater, NS, Canada

1 posted 07-20-2000 10:52 AM       View Profile for HerMelness   Email HerMelness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HerMelness's Home Page   View IP for HerMelness

"Waking up next to her.. Is a fantasy in itself"

Quel romantique! =) I love this poem.. few guys will spell out their feelings like this.. when you do find that girl.. she better realize how lucky she is! Amazing poem!=)


-Wherever you go, go with all your heart.-
since 06-27-2000
Posts 290
Dwight Il, US

2 posted 07-20-2000 11:38 AM       View Profile for Jacman   Email Jacman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jacman

Hey, I know exactly how you feel.  My only advice, don't let her hurt you.

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3 posted 07-21-2000 12:43 AM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

Great Poem! One day you'll find the perfect girl...until patient (easier said than done, I know) All good things come to those who wait. I know it's lonely and I know it's hard...but you'll find her and you'll be happy as ever! Keep helps...A LOT!! Best of luck, my heart is with you. Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*
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since 03-01-2000
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not heaven nor hell so...

4 posted 07-21-2000 02:02 AM       View Profile for AngelShell   Email AngelShell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AngelShell

What can I say - Wow!
As a girl myself I know what it means to find out there are such romantics still out there, that romance isn't dead.  
Today so many guys believe that love is making out in the backseat of a car, and it hurts them when they realize that it's not love at all.  What were they thinking!
The world needs more guys like you, more guys that know the true meaning of love.  I'm sure that you'll find that girl one day, I know that you will.  I am a firm believer in the thinking that there is only one TRUE LOVE out there for each of us.  There may be others who make us happy, but there is only one TRUE LOVE.  That is very important to belive, but in the mean time, don't be afraid to have a little fun with someone that makes you happy.
The best advice I can give you, is keep smiling and never give up!

Love Always,
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since 07-01-2000
Posts 516
Baltimore, MD, USA

5 posted 07-21-2000 09:18 AM       View Profile for Chel   Email Chel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chel

Hey, I know this feeling all to well.  Just keep your head up.  Like Jess said "Good things come to those who wait" and I think it is true.  Well keep up the good work.


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"
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6 posted 12-02-2007 08:25 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind


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