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Chel
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0 posted 07-19-2000 06:54 PM       View Profile for Chel   Email Chel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Chel

Driving through the graveyard at night
Hoping some little kids aren't playing Hide-n-Seek
Instead you hit a tombstone hoping no one will notice
Being stupid and showing off you break the light
How wonderful
Sitting in the car making sure everyone is okay
Everyone is terrified
Two children crying
One person yelling
The other trying to calm people down
Including the driver
You are terrified about what your parents are going to say
Wishing you hadn't done it
You sit terrified
No one is hurt physically, but emotionally
Even the good driver that I was
Wasn't thinking about what she was doing
Knowing she wasn't even going 5 mph
Ruined the car
You have a beginning
You have a middle
You have the climax
And now your terrified


~Please be careful when you drive.  I could have done more damage than I did, but I was lucky.  Bad things can happen in the safest places.~


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"
© Copyright 2000 Michelle Y. Plocinik - All Rights Reserved
Chel
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1 posted 07-19-2000 07:29 PM       View Profile for Chel   Email Chel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chel

Please take your time when you drive, I never thought anything would happen when I was driving, but I was wrong.  I just hope that it doesn't happen to anyone else.  I know that it wasn't that big of a deal, but I was devestated.  Take care, Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"
Kittie
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2 posted 07-19-2000 08:04 PM       View Profile for Kittie   Email Kittie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kittie

Chel, accidents happen, and as much as the accident seems your fault, we all have a part in it cause we wanted you to drive in there.  You're a great driver, and I'll stand by you for that one.  And you know I'll always be a careful driver.
Kittie


Kit McCallum
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3 posted 07-20-2000 07:33 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Wow ... sounds like you had quite a fright Chel. Glad you're all OK though!  You had my heart going with this verse ... nicely penned!

Best wishes,
/Kit
StarPryncess17
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scary indeed Chel, glad to hear everyone is ok, and as hard as it all may seem, you'll learn from this and you'll be a better driver...right? Keep it up my dear!! (the writing that is) Love Always~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*
The_Driven
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5 posted 07-21-2000 01:23 AM       View Profile for The_Driven   Email The_Driven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The_Driven

It is nice to hear that you, along with your passengers are okay, but also disturbing when one realizes that anything, including a life can come, and go in a heartbeat. Stay safe, and be careful out there; Driving is no joke.
By the way, nice poem!
Artic Wind
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Enjoyed

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