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Lucius Cade
Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235
Saskatchewan

0 posted 2000-07-19 05:22 PM



You have an energy so pure
Innocent yet mature

I love it when your shy
When I attempt to pry

Ever so gently into your soul
To see your beauty as a whole

Love is a strong word
But I am not afraid to use it
For what at first was akward
Is now a perfect fit
A question I have pondered
Is one of just friends or more
And I have often wondered
What that would be like to explore

Just dont forget

You are so much braver
than I give you credit for



Lucidity is the answer to all problems

© Copyright 2000 Lucius Cade - All Rights Reserved
Chel
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511
Baltimore, MD, USA
1 posted 2000-07-19 06:56 PM


This poem was very well written.  I enjoyed reading it.  Keep up the good work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-12-02 03:49 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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