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buttercup411
Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 41
miami, fl, u.s

0 posted 2000-07-19 05:12 PM




i woke form my dream
..  you were no longer there

what was i supposed to do now that i was lost..

dreams are just dreams and only that
    i was lost

my days went by your essence still in my deepest thoughts,
my feelings grew stonger
each thought of you was sealed in my body......burning

drown in my sorrow was all i did..
      i was still lost

as the days went by ...
the power inside me lifted me form down under
brought me to life
the pain was let free..

i woke from my dream
you were no longer there

i was lost, now i'm found


@#$%$*&%^*(&()*)_()&*(^&^$$@@!
i haven't written in a long time everything is hectic right now school and all..... hope you guys like it....



thanks for reading,
love....
buttercup



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TrueLUV
Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.
1 posted 2000-07-19 06:33 PM


Iam a new member I loved your poem hopefully everything turns out ok. Hope to read more of your poetry  
Alex Sankowich
Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 28
North Carolina, USA
2 posted 2000-07-19 06:56 PM


Whoa!  I was gonna write a poem called "Dreams" earlier today!  Kewlness!  Nice people  

--
"True love lasts forever."
"Heroes get remembered, but legends never die."



Alex Sankowich
Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 28
North Carolina, USA
3 posted 2000-07-19 06:58 PM


Nice people?  Oooooooooops....stupid typo.  I meant to say nice poem.  But yeah, y'all are some nice people....hehe.


--
"True love lasts forever."
"Heroes get remembered, but legends never die."



buttercup411
Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 41
miami, fl, u.s
4 posted 2000-07-19 08:47 PM


lol...nice people : )
thanks for the replies

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-12-02 03:50 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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