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Tamma
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0 posted 07-19-2000 03:34 PM       View Profile for Tamma   Email Tamma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tamma


My heat is torn in two,
Tell me, what can I do?

Marlonís always been there,
But he doesnít seem to trust.

Albert is there to talk,
But just so far away.

I just canít seem to choose.
Why must it be so hard?

Marlon says he loves me,
But whats love without trust?

Albert was there that night,
The night I lost all hope.

Why must this heart of mine,
Play with my mind and soul?

Marlon just doesnít know,
What I hold in my heart.

Albert was in my dreams,
And I showed him myself.

My heart is tied in knots,
Trying to get things strait.

Marlon doesnít know,
That this is killing me.

Albert knows I'm confused,
But doesnít know hes why.

I must decide between,
But itís impossible.


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TrueLUV
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since 07-19-2000
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1 posted 07-19-2000 03:37 PM       View Profile for TrueLUV   Email TrueLUV   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TrueLUV

Life is hard, but always remember if you really need to talk try family first. Great poem hope to read more of you wrok
Jacman
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since 06-27-2000
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Dwight Il, US


2 posted 07-20-2000 11:33 AM       View Profile for Jacman   Email Jacman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jacman

Your situation really sucks.  When put in this place, I went with the one who knew my heart the best.  I was right.  We aren't togethor, but she is my best friend in the world, and the one person on this planet that I really trust.  Good luck, I hope I helped.

Jason
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not heaven nor hell so...


3 posted 07-21-2000 04:19 AM       View Profile for AngelShell   Email AngelShell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for AngelShell

A great poem.
Keep up the great writing.

Love Always,
Shell.
Kittie
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since 07-08-2000
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4 posted 07-21-2000 07:37 PM       View Profile for Kittie   Email Kittie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kittie

You did great on wording this.  Keep up the great work!
Kittie


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5 posted 07-22-2000 07:12 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

well the poem was nicely worded...however the situation is icky! On this one I would have to say listen to your heart...and if in your heart, you can't find the answer then befriend both of them, but don't choose. They both have given you reasons not to be with them...whether it be trust or miles between you two. Maybe you need to find someone who can give you what you need, not just half of what you need. at any cost, I hope you make the right decision for your heart. Keep writing! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*
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Realm of Supernatural


6 posted 12-02-2007 08:29 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

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