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LyricFetish
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since 01-13-2000
Posts 515
North Carolina


0 posted 07-19-2000 11:21 AM       View Profile for LyricFetish   Email LyricFetish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for LyricFetish


I wish I could touch you
But you sit there so damn regally
So distant from this world
And I never can
I've listened to your thoughts
Your plans to rise above it
But your words are so hollow
That I fear you may have fallen
Into insanity
Please look back upon your life
Remember all the times we've shared
The tears I poured into your hands
Our secret pact of friendship
When you descend from your higher plane
I want to be there
Waiting for you
That I might take your hand
After we have faded
I know you'll be grateful
I know you'll accept your heart
My mysterious prince
And until that hour
Thirst not with your mouth
But with your soul
For you are He
Whom I have searched for all this time

It's so obvious
That the promise
Keeps me here
Painting pictures where
All the colors
Disappear
*Lit
© Copyright 2000 Meredith - All Rights Reserved
StarPryncess17
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since 05-31-2000
Posts 944
Colorado


1 posted 07-19-2000 04:31 PM       View Profile for StarPryncess17   Email StarPryncess17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit StarPryncess17's Home Page   View IP for StarPryncess17

Beautiful LF!! I had to read it over twice it amazed me so much! your work truly is wonderful!! Keep it up...and as for the situation, my heart is with ya!! best of luck~ Love Always~*~Jessica~*~


*~* I wIsH I wAs A LiTTlE gIrL aGaIn; SkInNeD kNeEs AnD bRuIsEd ElBoWs ArE eAsIeR tO hEaL tHaN a BrOkEn HeArT!*~*
LyricFetish
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since 01-13-2000
Posts 515
North Carolina


2 posted 07-19-2000 10:06 PM       View Profile for LyricFetish   Email LyricFetish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LyricFetish

Thank you very, Very, VERY much!!

*~Meredith~*

It's so obvious
That the promise
Keeps me here
Painting pictures where
All the colors
Disappear
*Lit
Jacman
Member
since 06-27-2000
Posts 290
Dwight Il, US


3 posted 07-20-2000 11:28 AM       View Profile for Jacman   Email Jacman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jacman

What is with us writing poetry about each other?  I don't know...hehehe.   Well anyway this is quite an astounding piece and I hope that all your dreams come true.

Jason
Kit McCallum
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since 04-30-2000
Posts 16920
Ontario, Canada


4 posted 07-20-2000 07:56 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

Absolutely beautiful LyricFetish!  Very well done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
Alwye
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since 06-16-99
Posts 3968
In the space between moments


5 posted 07-20-2000 11:14 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

"And until that hour
Thirst not with your mouth
But with your soul" -- Very powerful words here!  Overall, a well done piece of work!  Keep it up!  


*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis
LyricFetish
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since 01-13-2000
Posts 515
North Carolina


6 posted 07-21-2000 02:15 PM       View Profile for LyricFetish   Email LyricFetish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LyricFetish

Hey guys, thanks for your support. I really don't know what to do about this poem, meaning the subject matter. Boys are so friggin complicated!!!! Well, anyways, be real people.

*~Meredith~*

It's so obvious
That the promise
Keeps me here
Painting pictures where
All the colors
Disappear
*Lit
Artic Wind
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since 09-16-2007
Posts 8075
Realm of Supernatural


7 posted 12-02-2007 08:25 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
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