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Girls Can Be Disappointing

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TrueLUV
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since 07-19-2000
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0 posted 07-19-2000 01:12 AM       View Profile for TrueLUV   Email TrueLUV   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for TrueLUV

Tell me why I can't see through your lies
My friends always tell me and parents have warned me
I didn't listen and now I am filled with sorrow and distrust
I need someone to hate, but I can only hate myself
Because Iam the one who let it go on for so long


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Jose Marti
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1 posted 07-19-2000 10:25 AM       View Profile for Jose Marti   Email Jose Marti   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jose Marti

It's so true, more power to ya man. You always have to watch out with them.
You're new here aren't you?
Crystalina123
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2 posted 07-19-2000 11:46 AM       View Profile for Crystalina123   Email Crystalina123   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Crystalina123

Yes girls can be very disappointing, after all we're human as well. I can identify with the feelings in this poem, even though I am not a guy. Scary thing is you sound exactly like my ex, so much so that I had to check your profile and compare E-mail addresses. Freaky!! LOL   Good poem though.

Love,
Crystal

When a door closes, another door of oppurtunity opens. The only problem is that most of us are so busy looking at the closed door that we fail to see
Alex Sankowich
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3 posted 07-19-2000 12:40 PM       View Profile for Alex Sankowich   Email Alex Sankowich   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Alex Sankowich's Home Page   View IP for Alex Sankowich

Not all girls are disappointing, yo.  Just gotta find that special someone.  Good luck to ya.


--
"True love lasts forever."
"Heroes get remembered, but legends never die."


ashley cain
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4 posted 07-19-2000 04:00 PM       View Profile for ashley cain   Email ashley cain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ashley cain

Hey, I'm a girl, but I feel ya.  In the switch around, guys can dissapoint too. Great poem
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5 posted 07-19-2000 07:05 PM       View Profile for Jenn Cirrincione   Email Jenn Cirrincione   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jenn Cirrincione

You know relationships all around suck... I know this, but the problem is guys can be just as dissapointing as girls. I wish I could say there is a dominant sex in this aspect, but I'm afraid not. I hope we all meet that "someone"
Jenn
Chel
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6 posted 07-19-2000 07:10 PM       View Profile for Chel   Email Chel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chel

Hey there, I know the feeling.  I am not a guy, but i know that we can get a little out of hand, but not all of us are that bad.  I hope that you find that special someone, because if you live without them you don't know what you are missing.  Just keep your head up.  I liked the poem though.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"
Kittie
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7 posted 07-19-2000 08:01 PM       View Profile for Kittie   Email Kittie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kittie

This is really strong even though it's a very short poem, and very well written.  The lines there seem to be all that needs to be said, great job!
Kittie


Artic Wind
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Enjoyed

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