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True Love Lost

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TrueLUV
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since 07-19-2000
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Connecticut, U.S.A.


0 posted 07-19-2000 12:50 AM       View Profile for TrueLUV   Email TrueLUV   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for TrueLUV

As I feel your innocence amongst me
I feel like an angel in the sky
You bring me up when I'm in need you cherish me when I' am weak
You show me passion on your knees you fill me up with perfume showers
You always said I'll be their for you and you always was
You never lied to me, but always loved me as I'am
My tears of leaves will always shine as long as you be mine for all time
Just say you love me twice upon a time and never let me go when I'am ready to die
Remember me for all I've done for all it's worth you still the one
The one for me to love and hold until it's time to sleep in the cold
To sleep alone for eterninties to come and be remembered as the son of love
To be admired as a lover and also a very loving father
To feel my children all succeed and my loving wife to see me weap, but weap of no painful sorrow, but be thankful that there's a tomorrow and to love all in the same tone because you never want to love alone.
© Copyright 2000 TrueLUV - All Rights Reserved
Rachel Turner
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since 07-15-2000
Posts 16
Judsonia, Arkansas


1 posted 07-19-2000 01:05 AM       View Profile for Rachel Turner   Email Rachel Turner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rachel Turner

Hey!! Great poem!!! it has a lot of feeling in it!!!
BabyGirl1
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since 07-02-2000
Posts 91
Morris, IL


2 posted 07-19-2000 11:57 PM       View Profile for BabyGirl1   Email BabyGirl1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BabyGirl1

This was a wonderful poem.  It shows every aspect of love.  Everyone wants and needs a love like that.

"We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can fly only by embracing each other."

-Luciano de Crescenzo-
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Realm of Supernatural


3 posted 12-02-2007 08:23 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND



 
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