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It would of been my loss

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TrueLUV
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since 07-19-2000
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0 posted 07-19-2000 12:47 AM       View Profile for TrueLUV   Email TrueLUV   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for TrueLUV

There is something upon your lips
I feel you want to say
And when you said that "I Love You"
All my pain drifted away
I felt those words you said to me , you meant with heart and soul
And now I know!
You I'll never let go
© Copyright 2000 TrueLUV - All Rights Reserved
Phoebee
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since 07-09-2000
Posts 42
Peoria, AZ


1 posted 07-19-2000 12:49 AM       View Profile for Phoebee   Email Phoebee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Phoebee

Nice poem.  You have a lot of emotions flowing through you, don't you?  You're doing great.  I hope to read more of your work.

"Everything happens for a reason!"
smoothie
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since 07-24-2000
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2 posted 07-24-2000 12:50 AM       View Profile for smoothie   Email smoothie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for smoothie

Kirill, you are a really meaningful person in my life, and this peom is really touching, keep up the good work bro!!!
sherm
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since 07-21-2000
Posts 94
Evansville,IN


3 posted 07-24-2000 01:53 AM       View Profile for sherm   Email sherm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sherm

truely heartfelt poem     good job!
Vball Chickie1624
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4 posted 07-24-2000 07:58 AM       View Profile for Vball Chickie1624   Email Vball Chickie1624   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Vball Chickie1624's Home Page   View IP for Vball Chickie1624

short but sweet...very good poem...and you're lucky to have felt that feeling!  Keep writing and good luck.

Love ya
Danielle  

"Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you
Chel
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since 07-01-2000
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Baltimore, MD, USA


5 posted 07-24-2000 09:39 AM       View Profile for Chel   Email Chel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chel

Great poem.  A lot of emotion.  Keep up the good work.

Chel


"True friends stab you in the front"
"Always do your best, you will always succeed"
heartbroken
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since 07-25-2000
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6 posted 07-25-2000 01:20 AM       View Profile for heartbroken   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for heartbroken

I really like this poem. All your poems are great. They have really deep things in them. I cant really relate to them cuz i have never been in love. There is something i would like to tell this guy i like alot but im too shy, maybe i will some day. Keep up the good work!  )
Rachel8383
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7 posted 07-26-2000 01:45 PM       View Profile for Rachel8383   Email Rachel8383   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rachel8383

great job, i know the feeling!  keep it up,
*Rach*
Erin
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8 posted 07-26-2000 02:19 PM       View Profile for Erin   Email Erin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin

wow!!! i like this...i know that feeling all to well... i feel the same way about my boyfriend...keep up the good work...ill keep reading...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~
Gregory
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9 posted 07-26-2000 02:21 PM       View Profile for Gregory   Email Gregory   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gregory

Great job TrueLUV..That poem was nice..keep writing and good luck!
Artic Wind
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10 posted 12-03-2007 09:39 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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